Chapter 17 My cousin, Mara

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Today is the big day...
CHAPTER XVII
When I started being with Mara, I always believed that no other woman would ever make me feel the same way she did. Never.
All the things a girl can provoke in a man, she had provoked in me.
And so it was for a long time. I was crazy about her. And I swear I never looked at another woman the same way again.
Of course, I still liked other women, obviously. But what Mara made me feel, I knew no other could do.
But that changed suddenly.
Without my feelings towards Mara changing in the slightest, Sabrina arrived.
At first, she just seemed attractive and pretty to me.
Then, oh boy, she was a real knockout.
And later, an infernal bombshell.
I admit that my complete attention still belonged to my girlfriend. I felt like she was the love of my life.
Later, we started doing things we weren't supposed to do, being promiscuous, and my judgment went cloudy.
What used to make me crazy about her was getting covered up because of what we were doing. There were a lot of things going through my head at that time. I also felt super excited all day. And since we were a couple who knew each other inside out, we thought it was part of our deepest desires, our essence, to go through that moment without inhibitions. What better way to satisfy them?
At no point did either of us understand the consequences of our actions.
Nothing could separate us. We both enjoyed seeing the other get carried away.
Yes. It really turned me on.
But then I started taking stock of what we were doing.
I wanted to stop.
Mara didn't. She still hadn't found her limit.
And while it elevated me to see her do those wild things, at a certain point my head said that's enough.
I don't know if it was out of fear or lack of courage or wanting her not to want anything else or even to lose her, I let the situation get out of hand.
It hurt. I admit it.
I knew we had gone too far.
I wanted her die. I never felt so bad as I did during that time. And in that instant, Sabrina entered my head. It was like something that came to me just when I needed it. If it hadn't been for her, things would have turned out differently. Without a doubt. I started to really enjoy her a lot and she began to take up space in my life. While Mara explored her more degenerate side without inhibitions, she was there for me, generating all kinds of emotions and making me not think too much about the madness we were committing. She became someone very special to me. Regardless of what I felt for Mara. And now, here we were. She, on her bed, naked and covered by the fine fabric of the sheet. She was waiting for me again. The two of us wanted to get everything out that we felt inside. I walked towards the bed. Sabrina was looking at me with a serial predator's face, carnivorous. She lifted the sheet, letting me see her divine and free body underneath. I threw the towel on the floor and got in with her. She received me with her arms, smiling at me as she gave me a kiss. Ummm was heard in the room when our faces collided again. I wanted to be overwhelmed by her. I caressed the skin of her back and waist like a madman. Infinite softness... She was also caressing me all over with her left hand, almost as if she were on top of me. The tips of her erect nipples brushed against my chest as she moved. My cock, well hard, pointed upwards firmly. I almost died when she took it without warning with her hand. She squeezed it lightly, causing a little pre-seminal liquid to emerge from me. She gave me a kiss so hot that it ended in a bite. Yes. Very horny. With her teeth, she pressed my lower lip and looked at me like a wolf. I adored this wild part of Sabrina's intimacy. In the bedroom, she emerged like a volcano in activity. I stared at her, completely lost. She was moving up and down on the skin of my member, pumping all the blood out of my body. She smiled without stopping Bite me. I knew that smile, mischievous. Something had planned to do. I took her by the breast. She tempted me so much to see how they were moving. Her white and freckled skin was too much for me to keep at bay. She made a face of pleasure and let go of my lip. I laughed with satisfaction. ME: What are you going to do?-. I said, wrapped in her game. She kept looking at me pervertedly and started moving backwards. Uf... If it was what I thought, I would die right there. With the hand that had me grabbed by the cock, she lowered my skin down to the base, holding firmly. I groaned sharply. My skin became terribly tense from the force she applied downwards. Slowly she placed herself on my pubis. The way she bit her lips made me delirious. SAB: Now it's my turn!-. She exclaimed in a complicit gesture. And very hotly, she lowered her head. I came before she touched me. With a murderous look, she put my cock in her mouth. God... The way she did it... How she opened her mouth, enveloping all of my trunk between her lips... ME: Aaaaa...-. I expressed drunk with pleasure. She had stretched my skin so much that each breath made me feel spectacular sensitivity. I twisted. Sabrina was doing it slowly but strongly. She applied movements from top to bottom, looking at my cock and looking at me. And so on. ME: Aaaahh... Noo.. Ooohhh-. When she saw me bending over, she smiled. I took her by the cheek. Her beautiful red hair fell onto my hand. I caressed her with much love while she was making me come terribly. How divine it looked... It didn't enter my head that a woman like her would be with me... And in my groin... Neither of us wanted to give up this one last time. 'Mmmm... oommm... mmchhjk' could be heard throughout the room. I was getting a very pleasant blowjob. I remained almost sitting, holding her face while nodding on my pubis. She made me groan terribly. It had been a while since she did it like that... way. “Aaa… Ooohh… Aaaww…”. As she moved... I always liked how she did it to me. The warmth of her mouth... It was very special for me. In a moment, she stopped and gave me a kiss on the hand. “Chuiik”. And continued sliding her lips over the skin of my cock. How insane... Every part of my body, every cell in my system, was convulsing. The beautiful Sabrina... That infernal slut who had earned all my attention, was between my legs, devouring my cock as if there were no tomorrow. “Mmmm… Oommmm…” she repeated without stopping while kissing my entire cock. There wasn't a space left unlicked. Uf... How could I go on after this? I was surprised by the way I was hooked to my trunk. Face of damnation, of desire, had. I had waited so long to be with her... And now, again, she was with me, in her bed and giving a blowjob like never before. It was clear that I wasn't the only one who missed... She took her time. Licking it with much love and I was delirious. “Mmm… mmmoo… aahh….” was heard permanently. A cock-sucking video porn. Although, of course, it was much more than that for me. YO: Do you know how I missed this? Ohhh... SAB: Mmm… haaa… I also missed it...- Exclaimed with a relaxed voice. I was bending all over. No doubt about it. YO: Oohh... You kill me... Diosss ahh...- Almost screamed from the divine pleasure she made me feel. Then she started doing it slower. And with her tongue! Uuff... I had to say that I was very surprised by this attitude. As if she had been liberated from the chains that held her back and now there was nothing that could stop her. It was beautiful to have her like that... What a woman who made me fly. She closed her eyes and slid her tongue slowly over the entire head and glans. She sighed with each movement. The deep blue of her eyes pierced through me from side to side in every glance. It wasn't just sex. Of course not. There was more. I don't know how to explain it. I hadn't forgotten the past, but being with Sabrina made me feel full, good. We I understood her very well, as if we had known each other forever. And now she had it in the lower part of my body... I was doing it with a tremendous love. Because that's how it was. She wanted me. The flush on her skin confirmed it. How many times in her life would she have gotten nervous with someone? A woman like her, with so much character, so much ease... Probably few times. But with me it was different. I felt like I made her vulnerable in some way. No more... She was hooked to my cock as if it was the last time she'd hold it in her hands. Which was probably true, in the end. Sabrina knew it was very likely that I wouldn't see her again, or Mara either. Better not think about it... I was lost in the tremendous kisses she was giving me. The subtle way she touched me with her lips. So beautiful... At one point, she looked at me straight while lowering her lips down my chest. I smiled like an idiot. SAB: I love you...- She exclaimed very tenderly. I didn't expect it. I groaned loudly... It killed me with love.... YO: Oohh... I do too, beautiful... Aaa... A grimace appeared on her face and she continued to suck every inch of urethra she could. I had gotten quite red from the friction. God... That tongue was killing me. And then I heard her sighing. Mmmmm... She was doing it rapidly, with her eyes closed. That dreamy face... The colored hair... How not to fall in love with her. What made my legs tremble most was the loving treatment she gave me. Just like Mara... It's incredible that I would say her name at a moment like this. But that's what happened. I wanted to grab her, kiss her all over and never let her go again. SAB: Do you like it, John? Omm mm mm... YO: Ohh... You have no idea... SAB: I missed you so much... Leamm... That she wouldn't keep talking to me like that. I grabbed my head. It was a reflex. A thousand things were going through my mind. It was seconds before I lost myself between the pleasure I was receiving and the last months that had passed. Like flashes of film.
I lay completely flat.
Sabrina released my cock and came closer to me.
SAB: Is everything okay, gor?
Although my cock was still firm and pulsing, I sensed something.
YO: Yes, yes... Come here! - I said with a smile, taking her face gently.
I gave her a kiss like that, and she put her legs on both sides of me.
SAB: Haa... Mmm... - She moaned while readjusting to let me enter her again.
Then I hugged her from behind.
The moment she sat down made me shout out loud.
YO: Aaaaajjhhh...
SAB: Aaawwww... - She moaned at the same time.
It hurt a little inside her delicious pussy. It was very hard and tight.
Her mouth movements showed that she was also being killed by what was happening.
How tasty it jumped...
The sound of slaps and kisses were terrible.
Plaf, plaf, plaf ommm... chuaik.. chuuk.. mmppch...
As I was like that, I turned her over.
Sabrina sighed heavily.
Now I was on top and she was crossing her legs in the air behind me.
I saw in high definition how all my flesh entered her delicate and pink vagina.
Tight and very red...
Neither of us could contain our moans anymore.
Oooh... Aaaa... Aiioo... oouu... could be heard in the room.
SAB: If I had known you before.... Aaaii. - She screamed, closing her eyes with force.
My head exploded.
I started to twist just as I heard it.
But I continued to hold onto her.
SAB: Ooo... oo... Aaaaa... - She began to scream.
YO: Sabri... Aaa...
SAB: Don't stop, don't stop... Aaaa.... aaa... - She exclaimed, clawing at my back with her nails.
I came like the best one.
I couldn't help it.
I felt like I was discharging everything inside her.
She grabbed my hair and kissed me fiercely on the mouth. So much that she bit my lips while moaning like a goddess.
SAB: Mmmmmm... Aaaaaaaaa... - She expressed in an interminable scream.
How beautiful she looked...
All sweaty and flushed, finishing...
She squeezed my cock with her movements due to the sensitivity she felt.
Our breathing was extremely accelerated.
I now she was getting me super slow. I could feel my sperm starting to come out slowly from the inside of her pussy.

Sabrina wasn't stopping from moaning, low down. And she wasn't letting go of me.

What a delicious time it had been...

Her tits, stuck to me, were sweating. I loved it. I couldn't stop looking at that sea of freckles on her bust.

Indescribable...

After a few moments, I disentangled from her mouth.

She seemed to enter a total relaxation fountain.

When I moved a bit, I noticed she had blood on her lips.

ME: Uhh! Did I hurt you, beautiful?.- I said, exhausted.

She wiped her hand across her mouth, but there was nothing there.

She opened her eyes and looked at me.

I think I noticed her pupils dilating.

SAB: Uhh... No! You hurt me!

More blood droplets appeared and fell onto the bed.

I touched myself with my hand and was surprised to see it was quite a lot.

I had a cut lip.

Or again?

I thought...

SAB: Sorry! I'm an animal...

ME: Haha, it's okay, sweetie...- I replied, trying to focus on her.

SAB: I always hurt you, I'm a silly one...- She lamented.

I smiled and caressed her cheek.

She still had my cock inside her.

She took my hand and made a gesture.

ME: I'm going to clean up before you ruin the bed jeje

SAB: I'll help you, hope I didn't cut you too much.- She expressed with concern.

Carefully I pulled it out of her.

She couldn't help but moan a little when I did.

She had semen emerging and falling onto the skin of her vulva and legs.

I got up from the bed and already had a thread of blood on my chest. Incredible, ja.

As we were like that, we went to the bathroom.

She stayed standing next to me.

I washed myself a bit.

When I looked at myself in the mirror, I realized it was a pretty deep cut on one end of my lip.

SAB: I want to die, look how you hurt me!.- She said something annoyed with herself.

ME: Haha, maybe it sounds weird, but I liked when you bit me.- I replied, grabbing some toilet paper to apply pressure to the wound.

SAB: I gorged myself too much... She was holding her head, slightly tempted.

ME: Did I ever tell you how beautiful you are?

SAB: Hahahaha, what a doubt!

We both laughed in complicity.

I finished cleaning and left the bathroom to her. I had to stay for a bit longer with the paper in my mouth. If it didn't close, I would have to put some glue on it.

I went back to her room and put on my boxer shorts.

I grabbed the phone. The infinity of times I'd done that waiting for a message from Mara came to mind. It was like a flash.

Although, of course, now there were only messages in my friends' groups.

I reclined for a moment and closed my eyes. I started breathing as if I were being executed.

I felt it in the lower part as if I'd had action like never before.

And the softness of the sheet and bed made me almost fall asleep within minutes.

I became aware when Sabrina returned and got into bed too, but I was so relaxed that I didn't move. She got under the sheet and snuggled up against me. I could even hear her breathing on my skin.

She hadn't put on any clothes. At least, it seemed that way. When she arrived, she leaned her tits against my body.

Palm.

The last time I slept with her was at Fernanda's house. Every time I did, I always felt good. The truth is, I didn't know how much had passed. But soon, I opened my eyes.

The room was dark.

Sabrina was still sleeping, wrapped around me, with one hand crossed and resting on my shoulder.

The first thing that came out involuntarily was to give her a kiss on the forehead. Maybe, by habit...

Mmmjjm she made me sleepy.

It was a very nice feeling being like that.

I had a very tasty smell in her hair. I'd always gone crazy about that. I don't know why.

I stayed there for a bit. Looking at the ceiling and petting her.

Inside, I knew it was my last night with her. And I'm sure we both needed it.

Sabrina had earned a place in my life like few people had. It would be painful that it wasn't... It would have been better. But reality was that I didn't want to think about it. Logically, it would be bad for her too. What I did feel despite that circumstance is that there was something inside of me that seemed to want to get out. I no longer felt that tightness in my chest and throat. What did that mean? I didn't know. But all I thought about was enjoying those last moments with her like never before... In a moment, Sabrina also woke up. She opened her eyes smiling and kissed me on the mouth slowly. Mmchuiik. SAB: Mmm I fell asleep… What time is it?.- She said with the voice of someone who just wakes up. YO: No idea haha SAB: Do you still feel my arm? jeje.- She exclaimed because she had fallen asleep on part of it. YO: I guess so... When you start to feel it, I'll tell you haha... Na, kidding... SAB: Exaggerated...- She laughed almost yawning. She made a bit of effort to get up. Her boobs bounced in front of me in an extremely exquisite way. Ufff... She was wearing a thong and breasts. I won't stop saying it. What a piece of minon! She got out of bed and grabbed a white button-down shirt, like a pajama top. It ended at her booty and made her look very sexy. SAB: Midnight... YO: Oops... haha Me touched my lip with my tongue and it was a bit swollen, but I already felt the hangover. SAB: Shall we order something quickly? YO: Sure...- The good thing is that I didn't get drunk, je. What a bomb she looked, getting her hair ready like that in her pajamas. I was looking at her with admiration from the bed. She opened the closet and took out a short for me. YO: Then there was...- I commented between laughs. SAB: Jeje... You're not going to wear your dress pants... Inside I thought What do I do now? For the first time in a long time, I felt like I didn't know what to do. I wanted to stay with her as long as possible but I don't know if Sabrina would want it too. Although well, until that moment she had made me feel so good being with me. And for now, she wanted to eat. We ordered a pizza. Simple and quick. She also gave me a bra for me to put it on. I jacked off while getting dressed and leaving clothes there. She was laughing. I realized that Sabrina enjoyed every moment we spent together. It wasn't just when we were making love. She enjoyed a conversation, a moment of laughter. Even being stuck without saying anything. In one way or another, we were compatible. That phrase she said to me hours ago still resonated in my head. I wonder what would have happened... The food arrived and the central topic of discussion also did. It was impossible not to mention it. And since the moment was ripe, I also wanted to get rid of a question I had kept for a long time. I asked her. ME: Mara never said anything when we were together at Fernanda's? I wanted to know about that. It didn't seem possible to me that my girlfriend would give me away like that to another girl. No matter how hot it was. Sabrina looked at me. SAB: I wanted to talk about something else... That doesn't make sense, haha ME: Everything is part of everything... Besides, I already told you I won't be with Mara just because you want me to... SAB: Neither did I ask that... ME: You understand... She bit her lip laughing as if saying What a hunger you have! ME: You didn't answer... SAB: She said she could do whatever she wanted with you... ¡Contento!- Exclaimed, wanting not to delve too deeply into the matter. ME: Just like that? SAB: Yes, I think it was a particular moment that passed... She told me it really turned her on thinking about you being with me... Inside she thought Of course, so she could also do what she wanted. My face must have been so obvious that she quickly continued: SAB: I know what you're going to say and no, it's not like that... ME: What was I going to say? haha SAB: About Mara with Franco... ME: What? SAB: It was just a moment... Not a person. ME: I saw her...- Said taking soda. SAB: Do you really think she could or would feel something for him? Do you really believe that? ME: I only saw her like that with me... What she did with him... SAB: Sex, period... I looked at her. I didn't like it. that so easy to say. YO: So then for you too it was a moment and not a person with me? He made a gesture of 'do you really ask that?' I lowered my gaze. SAB: No, with you no... It's different... Good thing, I thought, je. SAB: Don't be an idiot... But in his case, yes, it was totally different. She told me how she felt, even before he got together with him. It was a moment that needed to pass and I think you too... YO: If you hadn't been there... I don't think I would have accompanied her. SAB: I know I'm a necessary participant in everything... YO: I wasn't saying that, silly, haha.- I answered lovingly. SAB: No, but seriously, neither Franco, nor Brian, nor anyone means anything to her. I know what I'm saying. YO: And you? SAB: My relationship with Mar, maybe it wasn't so much about friendship. I don't know how to explain it. There was a certain attraction between the two of us, like a tension... sexual, unsettling. Do you understand me? YO: I think so... But that doesn't mean they didn't care for each other as friends. SAB: No, obviously not. But what I'm referring to is that it was a more physical relationship than anything else. Even though we shared things, I wasn't to her what Fernanda or my cousin are... YO: I understand your point... SAB: I love her very much, she knows it, but I don't think I'll miss her too much... YO: Don't say that... You must miss her. SAB: She confided many things to me, but the main motivation of our relationship was always sexual, it's reality... From the first day. Mara discovered things about herself, limits she never thought she'd pass. And well, I also jeje YO: It's true... SAB: And well, then you came along... It wasn't planned, it happened and that's it. YO: I think the same... And what I said before is true. What I feel for you is independent... He smiled tenderly. It was a necessary conversation. And we were having it very well. SAB: Everything I told you is true, also... But in the end you know how things have to be. Yes, I knew. Maybe it wasn't right. But I also understood that neither of us was to blame for what had happened between us. All of us were playing a dangerous game and knew it from the beginning. These were the consequences, the repercussions. Everything in life has a price. Now we were paying it. And neither of us wanted that night to end. Maybe it should be this way. It seemed written like that. Also, I was comforted by Sabrina being so affectionate and sweet with me. Of course, our conversation changed, and at one point we started talking about other things. In fact, she told me how a famous Argentine film actor, a client of the studio where she once worked, got tired of throwing his weight around. ME: Are you messing with me? SAB: Ha ha, no! ME: I don't believe it... SAB: I have a morning after, did you see? Ha ha Of course I had. She was a total femme fatale. ME: And didn't you want to post about it? SAB: No! I didn't want to be the slut of... Besides, almost could've been my father... ME: What do I know... Many would have wanted to experience being with someone famous... SAB: Well, I didn't! Ha ha... Plus, he was in a relationship at the time, a weirdo... ME: Look what I'm finding out about... SAB: Besides, I had already done it with other girls from the office... Anyone, ha ha ME: And what's up with that? SAB: I don't know... I didn't give him an opening ME: The truth is, that guy gave me a different image... Nothing like it, ha ha SAB: I was still studying... It was during the time he was in Relatos Salvajes... ME: Of course, you were a kid...- I said with a sly tone. SAB: What's wrong with you, dear? Ha ha.- She laughed. ME: You're beautiful without doing anything... Imagine laughing like that...- She blushed badly. SAB: Shut up, jerk...- She exclaimed, biting her lips. ME: Ha ha, little rosy one!... SAB: Anyway... He didn't stand a chance jeje ME: I feel like a total privileged one...- I said looking at her with love. SAB: Ah, yes?.- She exclaimed with a rat-like face. ME: Yes... No doubt... SAB: Then why '... What if you don't come and make your preference right?.- She expressed with a provocative gaze as sensual. Uff... It reached the bottom of my soul. Of course, the night was not over yet. I didn't go to her, took the chair where she was sitting and pulled her towards me. I could see the desire in her eyes. SAB: How are you...?.- She expressed making allusion to my affection. YO: Excellent... SAB: Really I ask... YO: I don't lie...- I answered smiling and looking at her eyes and mouth. She got turned on by my trumpet as soon as I finished talking. Divine was she. I was going crazy that she had so many desires for me. We were two actors presenting ourselves in our last performance and we were going to get the most enjoyment out of it... At five minutes, we found ourselves again in her bed, completely naked. I, reclined, kissed her while she bumped her body against mine from above. I still hadn't penetrated her again, but my erect cock was flattened against my pubis by her pussy. She had sat on me, resting her hands on my chest. I had a splendid view of her yummy and big tits. Barely moved over the skin of my cock, going up and down very lustfully with her vulva. She rubbed herself so much that I started to lubricate, with the sperm droplets coming out.Chapter 17 My cousin, MaraThe gaze that put on me. It didn't take my eyes off every movement I made.
I took her by the boobs and started sucking them. I couldn't contain myself.

SAB: Oooohhh… Haaa…- She did while rubbing her vagina over the cock's trunk.
What goddess…

She licked her breasts like a madman. I could see how she was leaving all of them wet from my saliva. The path of freckles she had up to her chest canal was extremely kissable.

YO: You're killing me… Oohh…

SAB: Yes? Mmm... Ohh...

I squeezed one of her breasts hard with my mouth.

YO: Mmmaaa… See…

SAB: We'll keep doing it until you get tired... Aawww.- She moaned as soon as she finished the sentence. And it wasn't for nothing.
We were doing something unique, and when I heard her words, I felt like a last chain that held my willpower exploded into a thousand pieces from the tension force.

I closed my eyes and hugged her.

I felt like I was sinking into a fountain of lust.
I took her by the waist and lifted her up in the air to penetrate her.

SAB: Oooouujjhh…- She did, opening her eyes.

I stopped my cock and aimed it directly at her vaginal lips. With both hands on her hips, I sat her on me.

YO: Ooooooohhh…- It escaped me just like hers.
Her scream merged with mine.
It was so intense that we remained for a few seconds enjoying that beautiful penetration.
She leaned forward, letting her delicate red hair fall onto my face. The perfume emanating from it was deliciously cloying.
She seemed like a devil from hell.
I saw her moving her ass on me and didn't realize I was with her.
It could be a dream quietly.
SAB: Johnny…- She said with a forced voice and both hands on my chest.
YO: What's the matter? Aaahh…

SAB: I'll miss you... Aaaa…- She said sweetly.

I grabbed her by the face and pulled her towards me.
Our faces remained stuck together, looking at each other. We remained like that for a few seconds.
Time seemed to stand still.

YO: Do you know what What are you going to miss me for?.- I said with great security, which caused her to lament in a gesture. Both of us were moved, but I noticed that her eyes had become glassy. So much so that two small rivers of tears formed on the sides of her face, running across it. A knot formed in my throat. Seeing her sad was tearing me apart. Beyond what also gave me a lot of sadness. But I didn't want her to feel worse having to hide that feeling that overwhelmed her. I got up and took her by the cheek. Then I kissed her. It didn't matter if it could open the cut on my lip. Sabrina clung to me as if we were about to run out of time with each other there. And it wasn't far-fetched to think so. We made love without stopping until 3 am, when we left exhausted. We looked like two teenagers who had just started dating. Over the top... At the end, she was lying on top of me, with her breathing super accelerated and no strength left. I was also dead, but somehow or other I wasn't going to waste a single second. I liked how she hugged me, practically clinging to me. Her perfume was already mine and everything I breathed in was her. I caressed her while her boobs flattened against my chest. Fatigue dominated me, I wanted it to conquer me. But I wasn't going to let it. Especially because I was still inside her. Sabrina never moved so that she could come all over the cock cum, so it was impossible for me to stop. I admit I felt a bit of pain due to the tremendous friction I had subjected her to throughout the day. But I didn't care. I just thought about devouring her until time reclaimed its position. Because in the end, only he who does not surrender is him. There are different methods to try to give it a fight to time. Different concepts can be associated as organization, planning or discarding the unnecessary, all tending to improve the making the most of time's passage. To make it more effective or productive. I think the best option is to cherish the quality moments one can have. It's what makes you happier in the end and what remains in memory. This alternative has only one flaw: when one enjoys those unique qualities of circumstances so much, time advances much faster.

20 comentários - Chapter 17 My cousin, Mara

Yo creo que la mejor opción es hacer valer los momentos de calidad que uno puede tener. Es lo que te hace más feliz a fin de cuentas y lo que permanece en la memoria.
Un solo defecto tiene esta alternativa y es que cuando uno disfruta tanto de esas cualidades únicas de las circunstancias, el reloj avanza mucho más rápido.

este parrafo es perfecto,gracias, no veo la hora del desenlace
Yo creo que la mejor opción es hacer valer los momentos de calidad que uno puede tener. Es lo que te hace más feliz a fin de cuentas y lo que permanece en la memoria.
Un solo defecto tiene esta alternativa y es que cuando uno disfruta tanto de esas cualidades únicas de las circunstancias, el reloj avanza mucho más rápido.

este parrafo es perfecto,gracias, no veo la hora del desenlace
Gracias loco por mantener la cabala viva! Vamos Jonas, Sabrina y Mara lpmm!!
20-ole
Bro como me encanta esta historia, a pesar de que cada capítulo se siente corto uno siempre queda con ganas de seguir leyendo y saber que más sucede en la historia, espero con ansias el siguiente capítulo para saber que más sigue.
Gracias por la cábala. Ojalá se nos de. La historia viene zarpada y el final de este capítulo fue sublime. Espero el próximo con ansias!
@hiphop911 GRACIAS amigo.!! Cuando te sugerí esto como cábala . Fue después del partido con México como una de las tantas que tengo.. ahora solo te digo MiL GRACIAS!!! Y pásame cbu para depositar o del libro completo... subí precio porque es cábala!!!
Cón gusto pagaré..!!
Finalmente coronas te la cabala. Felicidades a todos. Con respecto al relato excelente, yo prometí comprarte la novela espero con ansiedad el momento
Felicidades.... yo tambien espero con ansias comprarte la novela completa.
Felicidades.... yo tambien espero con ansias comprarte la novela completa.
Tremenda esta segunda parte del reencuentro, como el reencuentro de la selección con la copa del mundo, este reencuentro se parece bastante a la final de la copa, justo en el mejor momento ya sabes que se termina lo bueno pero lo disfrutaste, no soy muy de las predicciones y eso, pero gracias por mantener la cábala ja.


vamos por ese libro!!
Ahora hablando estrictamente del relato sin metáforas o sí, cómo se hace para volver a "la vida normal" despues de ese reencuentro? Un psicologo urgente o un tiro en los huevos.

En la vida real o en la vida cotidiana de la actualidad ese caso ya estaría cerrado con una separación definitiva y cada cual por su lado.
Fuiste mi cabala para ganar el mundiaaaaaal cheeeeee.... Somos campeones otra veeeeez
Cada que subías un relato argentina ganabaaaaaa!!!!
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emmaq +1
Muuuy groso todo. Y gracias por seguir la cabala. El problema es q yo queria auto regalarme el libro para navidad. Tambien quiero comprar el 1ro pero en la pagina no esta.
Excelente relato. Quiero el libro. Donde compramos???
@hiphop911 ...ya se acerca noche buena, ya se acerca navidad y el pueblo está esperando el libro de mara- Jonas..🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎵🎵🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
@hiphop911 los lentos fuimos nosotros, deberíamos haberlo llevado en agradecimiento por la cábala...mal de nuestra parte..
@hiphop911 opaaaa!!! Estos si q promete ser tenebroso..jajajajaja
@hiphop911 es verdad, pero bueno todo no se puede jaja

en la próxima manifestación vamos a armar una cartulina jeje
Sera que por navidad larga el libro a la venta??
@ariel3417 🤕
JukUik
@ariel3417 @hiphop911 Cada vez que sale un capítulo y no se aclara nada sobre que pasó con Mara y en vez de eso Jonás sigue complicando todo el solo alno ser claro de una vez por todas, siento que lo que muetra el pana Ariel es lo que vasa terminar revelando que pasó o o terminará sucediendo...
JukUik
@ariel3417 @hiphop911 Cada vez que sale un capítulo y no se aclara nada sobre que pasó con Mara y en vez de eso Jonás sigue complicando todo el solo al no ser claro de una vez por todas, siento que lo que muestra el pana Ariel es lo que vas a terminar revelando que pasó o que terminará sucediendo lo que vengo diciendo que Mara terminara con el ano sangrando y como las fotos que compartió el amigo...
JukUik +1
En fin cada vez se le ve menos futuro a la relación de Jonás y Mara... Ninguno de los dos está ayudando, ni están siendo sinceros como para empezar a sanar un poco las heridas y los traumas que tienen, porque Jonás hay que decirlo, quedó traumado con todo lo que pasó e hizo Mara con Franco, y todo lo otro que el permitió por no negarle los caprichos a su noviay por dejarse llevar por la calentura del momento y entrar en eljuego de Fernanda y Mara.

No se porque algo dentro de mi me dice que como ya respondí en el comentario con las fotos del pana ariel. A Mara ya le dejaron el otro así de floreado (roto) y si no,muy pronto se lo va a dejar así... Espero equivocarme, pero algo me dice que eso va a pasar, y lo peor es que Jonás se va a enterar por alguna foto que le muestre algún conocido sin el estar preguntando ni nada.

O sin querer y sin estar buscando va a ver a Mara junto a Franco entrando a algún hotel o a la casa de Franco cuando el pasa por alguna calle en su carro... Algo que termine de derrumbar psicologicamente a Jonás al punto que también decida ir a un Psicólogo y corte contacto totalmente con Mara durante unos meses y ahí si haya algún reencuentro después de haber superado los 2 sus traumas.


Jajajaja se que me fuí leeeeejos, pero siento que por ahí va la historia, aunque hiphop siempre nos dala vuelta por donde menos lo esperamos...