El canto del cisne

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El canto del cisne



The Swan's Song..The things I can't repair
The things I left passing by for comfort
Proper moments lost due to distractions
Are forming a sticky and malodorous wall
That separates us.

My mind is always elsewhere
And although you are the protagonist of my daydreams
The reality is that I'm not here and you know it
I too can feel your absence…

In honor of all that was beautiful, all that was intimate
that was ours, let's end it on our own terms
Without a fuss, without fireworks, and with little sadness
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sumoA final that takes us to where time does not exist
To that economic immortality that was our refuge
In a life where it's hard to find one.
We undress without haste, without the urgency of other times
We kiss knowing who we're kissing
We lick each other finding a remembered flavor
Sweetly we tense up, we fine-tune
Without shortcuts, without phones, without less room
Without recriminations

The signals, your breathing
Your moans, your humid gaze
Your expression when I sink in searching the bottom
Your anxiety when I stop
We make and unmake ourselves, different forms of the same thing
But the end must come face to face looking at each other, knowing it's the last, we accelerate together
And while I'm going inside yours, my mind travels
To the instant when a door opened, I saw you and knew
That I was facing something important in my life.



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7 comentários - El canto del cisne

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Lamento incurrir en intercambio de elogios pero no puedo decir otra cosa que esto es fantástico. Gracias por producirlo y compartirlo, capo.
Al principio prometió que sería con poca tristeza y después....

Muy muy muy lindo!
Gran texto acompañado por la estética de esos bellos cuerpos.