My girlfriend Maru and her cum (7)

Good afternoon people of P!

Yes, I've been away for a long time since I published a story, but I had my reasons. The reality is that I feel like the page is falling apart and it's not as fun to enter anymore. That's why I was so absent, but I had this story in the pipeline, waiting to be published, and today I decided to finish it so you can read it. Thanks to all those who always put good vibes and support what I do.

I'll leave a new chapter of My girlfriend Maru and the cum here

I closed everything as I could and with my hand all cramped up, I ran to the bathroom to clean myself up a bit. To be honest, I think I went to the bathroom to clear my mind too, because I submerged my face in cold water and stayed there for a few seconds until I couldn't breathe anymore. I did this 3 or 4 times when Maru's door knocked.

M: Fat guy, are you okay? Something's up?
Y: Uh... s-siii... sisi, everything's fine love, I'm leaving.
M: Mmm ok, wait for me in the room. Thanks for coming and taking care of me, even though it wasn't part of the plan, sorry love!
Y: N-nooo... don't worry love, I'll be right there... calm down.
M: Oki, I'll wait
I stayed thinking about everything I had just seen for a few more minutes. Yes, it's true that the video was old, something she did when she was with someone else and didn't have to bother me. But what bothered me were the back-and-forths, her half-naked photos and that last video saying: I want you here... pointing to her mouth.

Really, Maru had blown my mind? Had she found Matias to answer him face-to-face about what I asked on MSN, or was it all just a type of sex chat? But what really gave me the most trouble and kept spinning in my head was: WHY AM I STILL WITH THIS CUNT?.

I tried to calm down a bit more, took another cold water rinse and managed to get the cock in my pants so it wouldn't be too noticeable. I didn't want Maru to see me coming out of the bathroom like that because she would think anything or maybe even get annoyed for being around her house like that. I I sucked the face and went straight to her room, giving myself small slaps on the face and encouraging myself to keep going.

I opened the room and Maru was waiting for me with an old school uniform, a short skirt, a completely cut-out shirt, and two little breasts. It was too much for my heart already

Y: Uh... eeehhh... w-what are you doing dressed like that?

M: What's wrong? Don't you like it? -she said giggling-

Y: S-si, siii obvious but why are you dressed like this?

M: Because I felt bad and you helped me like a prince, so I wanted to give you a prize for that and something else occurred to me too.

Y: Ahhh jaja... no, no big deal love.. emm I did it because I love you

M: Don't you want my prize then?

The cock half-jumped... damn male brain, primitive and masturbatory. I was getting very angry being this hot, not having done anything for 10 minutes since Maru's conversation with Matias and now I was ready to go to war again.

Y: Yes, of course... how am I not going to want the prize from my favorite graduate?

M: Jajajaja mmmm I love it then. Ready to find out what your prize is for being such a good boyfriend?

Y: Let's see...

Maru grabbed my hand, took me to the bed and took off my pants and boxers. The cock that was already hard and wet from what had happened earlier jumped into her face and hit her nose; which she found funny and started laughing.

M: Jajajaja it seems like someone likes my old school uniform, right?

Y: Ufff... yes... but... emm -I couldn't articulate a word-

M: Mmm do you want to know what my prize is for you?

Y: S-si... -I nodded-

M: Because you behaved well with me and I love you, you won a blow job with a happy ending and a nice morbid chat that you'll like.

Y: How?

M: Yes, what you hear love. You can ask me things or we can fantasize, today I'm all yours jaja

I didn't lie when I said almost finished there, I had to run away and sit down just as I was about to grab the cock because I thought I was going to go dry. The forehead and I left it looking at her.

Y: Anything What do I want? -I asked seriously-
M: If you love me, today I'm yours, do with me what you want.
This submissive and indulgent attitude of hers didn't appeal to me. Of course, she was coming from reading a conversation between the slut mother on MSM with videos and photos included and I felt like she was acting this way because of it. She's a woman, but above all a human being and we hadn't seen each other in weeks, since that revenge and left her hot. She shouldn't tell me that she'll only suck my cock and do what I want.
Everything felt wrong to me, but also everything was heating up twice as much. I thought for a bit about what I was going to ask her and the first thing that came to mind was for her to keep talking about Emi. I wanted to get out of my head what I had just read and seen, so that's why I went for it.
Y: Okay, I want you to tell me quickly, without getting into too many details, when Emi gave you the most cum.
M: Hahaha, no getting into details?
Y: Yes, suck on it and tell me.
M: Mmm, delighted...
Maru approached me, put herself between my legs, and started sucking me.My girlfriend Maru and her cum (7)M: Mmmm mmm... ahhhgg... mmmfff.
Y: Uff, god... give it to me, Maru, tell me.
M: Mmm... the time you gave me the most cum?... mmmfff...
Y: Yes, how was it? You sucked me off and finished, uff
M: Mmm mmm... mnop... ahhhggg...
Y: How was it?
I needed to get out of my head the image of the video because if that Emi was the one who gave me the most cum, that video shouldn't exist and if that's not nothing, then I needed to know and make myself the movie to erase the image of Maru from my head.
M: Mmmm... how much I missed sucking you love...
Y: Ahhh... uff, I was dying with desire to feel your mouth, but give it to me, tell me.
M: Ok... it was a day after we had sex... we were both half asleep and he asked me to get up because he was finishing and to open my mouth. I did as he told me, so I opened it wide and he started cumming shot after shot... there was a lot of cum and I swallowed a lot, but it was a lot.slutY: Ufff... okay, is it good and do you like it?
M: Mmmmff... -I've gone back to sucking her-
Y: Do you like that Emi gave you so much cum?
M: Mmhmmm.. sip.. ahhhggg
Y: If you had to... ufff... compare with my cum?
M: Mmmm...
Agarro mi cock, la pajeo un poco y miro para arriba como pensando.
Y: Do you have to think so much?
M: I'm trying to remember how we ended up, thinking that I always give it to her in the mouth, haha
Y: The last time I ended up on your tits... -I said looking at her-
M: Ah yes! Well, comparing them... this one is like triple the size of yours.
Y: WHAT?
M: Mmm siip...
Well, I had a different image in my head. It wasn't the best image, I don't know if it would have served me much, but at least I needed to get Maru out of my head smiling while Matias filled her mouth with cum. Also, I needed to get the conversation through MSM and the photos that were sent out of my head. Also, the videocalls that I couldn't see obviously...
The SLUT MOTHER... couldn't stop thinking about Maru and Matias. I went by the ass the image of this Emi finishing me off with triple my cum in her mouth because I was still thinking about what happened a little while ago.
On her part, Maru was still hooked on my cock... she kissed it, licked the trunk, head, and looked at me.sexWhat's up now? I stayed silent watching her give me my prize, thinking about a thousand things and none at the same time. Luckily, the fever had gone down and I wasn't even close to cumming, like it was just moments ago.

M: What's wrong love? Don't you like what I'm doing? mmmm...

Y: Ufff... I love it, yes!

M: You're quiet, more than usual -he said without stopping licking-

Y: I'm thinking love, I want a good prize since you were so good and I want to think well before asking you.

M: Haha, mm good... Think that I'm talking to my friend

R: nervously and went back to my thoughts. I had to do something, my girlfriend was giving me a deserved prize and I was like a fool without speaking, opining, nothing... if I kept going on like this, Maru would realize something bad was happening.

Just when I thought that, a terrifying image came to my head. Had I closed the conversation folder? Because I knew I had closed the video and photo one, but I didn't remember that one. The slut mother, look if the folder was still open, with Matias' conversation selected... Matias... ja... Matias...

Y: love, I know what I want.

M: Mmmm... finally, let's see! Do you want me to tell another anecdote about Emi? or maybe what I would have done with the remisier? haha

Y: No -I said seriously, but very, VERY hot-

M: Let's see...

Y: Pretend I'm Mati -I said defiantly-

M: How do you have it with Matias ehh...

Y: Yes, he's the one who gave my girlfriend the most cum, or not? I want to take advantage of that

M: Mmm... of course, of course...

Y: Of course, what would you do if I were Matias right now?

M: Right now?

Y: If...

I said that and automatically Maru put her cock in her mouth and started eating it with a lot of passion. I looked at her once, closed my eyes, and could feel she was using a lot of tongue and moaning low down.

Blow jobUfff I was dying, what happened? It was obvious that something was going on with this dude. I don't know if it was because of the heat, for carrying me against my will, for acting or whatever... but I was putting in a lot more effort than when he said he missed my cock.

I stared in amazement as my girlfriend just nodded at my cock, stopped for two seconds to catch her breath and kept going. I swear I had to pinch my leg without him seeing so the pain would mitigate the heat a bit because I felt like she was sucking the life out of me.

And: Ufff what's up love? Are you getting the idea?

M: Shut up, my boyfriend might be listening... mmmmff... mmmm

WHAT? Ah, did he put on a show?.. okay...

Y: Poor your boyfriend, does he know the things you do with me?

M: Mmm mmm... no -she said without taking it out of her mouth-

Y: How nice that you suck Maru, please! What got into you for blowing me off?

M: Mmmmfff... ish that... ahhgg... my boyfriend... mmmm... I wonder if your cum was more yummy than his... mmmmmm...

Y: Ah yes?? And did you tell him that mine tastes better to you?

Here Maru picked up speed in the blow job, making me see clouds. She was sucking with enthusiasm, passing her tongue over the whole frenulum and savoring it. Suddenly she went all the way down completely, something she never does with me, shook her head as if saying no and answered my previous question by going back up and giving a good suck.girlfriendAhhh... uff... don't you know? M: Mmm no... I didn't tell him... ahhhg... I didn't say anything to Matt. Y: But it's been a long time since you've sucked my cum, remember? M: Because I remember... -said while fondling myself and looking at my cock- Y: Uff... do you remember how you used to fill your mouth with it? M: Mmmm yes... you always finished in my mouth, never anywhere else. Y: Like if you ever... uff... had been fucked that way, no? ahhhh... M: Never, I loved when you filled my mouth, drink... Y: Are you going to take the cum today? M: Yes, Matt... Y: Sure? Don't you prefer it ends somewhere else? M: No, Matt -said while still fondling myself- Y: Where do you prefer? Se la tire, she looked at me, closed her eyes and smiled while continuing to play with my cock, moving it up and down. As if it were a joke only she knew, she looked at me and pointed to her mouth with the other hand. M: I prefer it here Hija de slut... the same answer from the video. She didn't even bother to be coy, nothing... just did it again and was looking really hot. Y: Come on, give me your cum, Maru, like you know how, come on... M: Mmm yes, finish for me Maru started bringing her mouth closer to my cock's head while fondling herself at a moderate pace, then putting it in her mouth one more time.storyI was perforating my skull, I couldn't believe it. I knew I had done wrong, that I didn't have to say 'make like you're Matias' but the heat and morbo had gotten the better of me. I let myself be carried away by my lowest instincts.

There I was with my girlfriend, dressed as a schoolgirl, sucking my cock like it was Matias and moaning (or not) with me. Do you think I did something to make things worse? Think again.

And: Do you know what we could do?

M: Mmmmff... what about Mati?

Y: We can film how you come out... ufff... send the video to your boyfriend. That way, he'll know which one you prefer

M: Mmmm... no... you know I don't like filming myself

Liaraaaa... I just saw a video of yours receiving cum, liar!!

Y: Okay, okay. Let's do it then. A short one, nice and close so you can see how it drips all over, don't you want?

M: No, that's the only thing I don't like Mati, you know... mmmmffff... take care of yourself

Y: Okay, okay. We won't do it but ufff... just if you let me make you wear the tiny ass with the... ahhh... raised skirt. You look beautiful, you know?

M: Do you like it? Are you going to give the cum to the little burrito too? She always has to be... mmmmff... hydrated, you know, you'd do her a favor

Y: Your boyfriend doesn't hydrate her?

M: No -said with a snort-

Y: I'll fill her up all the way, like the other day, you know?

M: Mmm ajaja... yes, I know -said closing his eyes-

If so, what? Had something serious happen or was it just getting carried away by the conversation?

M: Are you going to give me the cum Mati? Give it to me, I need it... mmmm mmmmm...

Y: Only if you promise to tell your boyfriend that my cum is the yummiest

M: I promise Mati, give it to me

That last burst of energy was too much for Maru and she realized because I started jacking off while sticking out my tongue.

M: Ah, okay, go ahead, give it all to me Mati, go ahead again

HOW AGAIN? It didn't matter, it was already too late... I was finishing up. When I felt the first cum shot, Maru exclaimed My cock in her mouth and without stopping moving my tongue over the frenulum, I received everything I had to give her.CumThe daughter of a slut seemed to be enjoying it, I don't know if she had caught the morbo of speaking and playing role-playing games or if she had really heated up. The only thing I knew was that she had ended like a horse and now she was doing it again.

I think with each jet, my cock hurt a little bit, but the image was a poem. My girlfriend was still sucking me slowly, with her eyes closed and moaning softly. Evidently, she was very hot and you could tell, there was no need to ask or touch her... just looking at her made you understand that if I didn't finish sucking her, she would hit my cock.

Maru sucked me one last time and pulled the cock out of her mouth. In the movement, a little bit of cum almost fell off, but she managed to get it inside and swallow.adulterousThis last orgasm had left me out of bed. My heart seemed to be coming out of my chest and my breathing was interrupted. Maru, on the other hand... Maru kept her eyes closed and I could see her moving her tongue inside her mouth. She was still savoring the cum...

Y: Uff love, you gave me a great prize! Thanks, you're the best! -I said to break the ice-

Maru opened her eyes and looked at me fixedly. I wouldn't know how to describe it, but it wasn't seriousness or anger, that's for sure... but it was a penetrating and even erotic gaze.

M: Love...

Y: Yes?

M: Mati's cum is much more yummy than yours.

My heart stopped.

Y: What?

M: Because I just came from sucking her cock and there are still remnants of her cum in my mouth, and it's more yummy than yours.

Pause... was she still in character? She went crazy!

Y: C- come on, no... I don't understand.

M: Yes, I just found Mati and she gave me a lot of cum. It tastes good, you know?

While Maru said this, she took off her schoolgirl disguise and put on an old t-shirt from home and stayed in thong.

Y: Ah, yes? And it was even more yummy then?

M: Yes, much more yummy love, besides she gave me a lot to have, don't you see how full my belly is?

She said this while rubbing her stomach.My girlfriend Maru and her cum (7)I don't know why that comment threw me off, I didn't expect it. I didn't even expect him to keep going on paper, since he had already sucked my cock and there was no reason for us to continue talking. Something about her seemed off, I felt like she was angry and not as happy or grateful for the care; just like she supposedly told me when she went to get me from the bathroom.

M: What's up love? aren't you going to...

My phone interrupted us. One of her friends was calling her, so she grabbed it and went to talk on the phone in the bathroom while carrying clothes to change. I stayed in her room, waiting and trying to understand everything that had happened. I still regret having the image of Maru on my PC video and regret telling him to pretend it was Matias when he was just sucking my cock.

As if nothing had happened, Maru returns to the room 20 minutes later with a completely changed face.

M: Dude, guess what? We got invited to a birthday party in Palermo. It's Joni's boyfriend Nati's friend's birthday.

Ugh, what a slut, I thought. There's nothing worse than going all the way out to the ass for a birthday when we said we'd be together.

Y: Hey, that sounds good, but isn't it kind of far? You're not really feeling well.

M: Yeah, dude, let's go and take a break. We haven't gone out or seen each other in ages.

Y: Okay, fine, let's do it.

I said I had just about changed relatively well because otherwise I would have to leave when the time came. When the hour arrived, I went to find Maru to hurry her up because a taxi was coming and she was just changing. Ugh, I don't know what it was... she had put on a beautiful black dress and was taking it down; that's how I saw the little black thong she had put on.slutI felt like my cock was about to burst just from looking at her, but I didn't want to stir up the waters; so I told her that a taxi would be arriving soon and she hurried to finish getting ready.

The car ride was as normal as it gets, we were chatting nonsense in the car and she was teasing me about Joni's birthday party and his friends. I said there were some acquaintances or friends of mine, like Oso, Marquitos, and Juani; so I could relax and have fun without having to put up with all her girlfriends' gossip.

After a couple of hours of driving, because we were lost in the ass-end of nowhere, we arrived and Nati greeted us at the door. It was a big house, the father of my boyfriend has a house in a gated neighborhood and someone had to come to fetch us from the entrance for security reasons. As we walked through the streets of the neighborhood, Nati and Maru were laughing, chatting, admiring their outfits, and teasing some girls who apparently were also going to the party. At one point I heard Maru shout Is she really coming? You're kidding me... and Nati was making gestures for her to quiet down. I didn't pay much attention, I was looking at the houses, the giant lake in the middle, and the cars of my mom's slut... like it mattered what they were talking about.

We arrived at the house, not sure if that's what you'd call it because it was a big old house, and we started chatting with everyone who was there. By the time it got to be an hour, I was sick of talking, so I dedicated myself to getting drunk with some of the guys I knew. It had been a while since I saw Maru, so I looked around for her while serving myself another fernet and I saw her talking to someone. She was acting weird, like laughing but also looking uncomfortable and red-faced. I moved a bit because a group was blocking my view of the other person and what I saw left me frozen. It was Matias, if... Matias, the one who talked to her on MSN, the one who sent that video full of cum to my girlfriend. I'm under pressure, but also my cock had risen. The heat of seeing my girlfriend like that, with that guy, was making me feel more than normal. I think I would have taken a fernet to calm down because my friends started screaming and tearing me away from the party. I tried to see over my shoulder and only caught Matias going into the bathroom and what seemed to be a hand putting him in.

I'll tell you what happened later, with all the details.

M: Come on, pass by, what's wrong, you're not seeing we're at a party with my boyfriend?

T: Euu, like I'm crazy? What's going on Marulandia, don't act like that when we talk on MSN, haha

M: Ayyy... shut up! You have to cut it off with what we talked about yesterday

T: Impossible, my good friend, you sent me a videito showing some of my friends and where she prefers -emphasizing the last part-

Maru was nervous, a little drunk, but also hot. That day I didn't fulfill my role as a partner well, to be honest, I had left her really hot and she never said anything.

M: Enough, buster! That was just a chat game and it's over! Do you hear me? -said to his cock that was making a bulge in his pants-

T: Please Marulandia... don't leave me like this, no? Look how I am...

M: Nonono... uff... poor Jose Luis... can't be a buster

T: Like what? We're here alone, with my two twin friends who are waving at me... hello beautiful -said rubbing her breasts with his hands-

M: Ey!! No, mm, take your hands away... don't get carried away...

T: What's going on Maru, do you want Jose Luis to eat you up? haha

M: -biting her lip- No, stop, enough Mati, seriously... uff

When she realized it, Maru was staring fixedly at Matias' cock and touching her breasts above the dress.

T: Epa epa... it seems like someone really wants ehh!

M: No! It's just... uff... today I'm hot and nothing... recollectionsss, but it can't be Mati

Mati looked at her, was approaching slowly until we were face to face, which made my girlfriend step back slowly. When she bumped into the toilet, she was surprised because Matias had undone her dress straps, leaving her breasts exposed in front of him.

M: What are you doing? -she said with her mouth half open-

T: Nothing... -and I kissed her-

The kiss was long and tonguey. Maru was flying high, feeling really hot but didn't want to admit it and the alcohol was taking effect.

M: Mmmfff.. ahhgg for Mati, no.. no, stop

T: What's going on, Marulandia?

M: Nothing, I'm dizzy, don't go on...

Maru sat down on the toilet and looked fixedly at Matias. He just smiled, not caring about the party, the music, if someone came in, nothing. He was only looking at my girlfriend smiling, knowing he had stolen a kiss from her and had her under his control.

T: Maru...

M: What's up, Mati?

T: Suck me for a bit, give it to me... -he said caressing her face and head-

Maru wasn't reacting well anymore, she wasn't thinking and was just getting hotter. The touch of Matias' hand on her face, the memory of their MSN chats and photos and videos they had passed back and forth, made her nipples get rock hard. Maru took advantage of this and started touching her breasts again and looking fixedly at Matias.

M: We can't do it, Mati, my boyfriend...

T: We can do what we want...

M: Mmm no... nono...

T: What do you want to do, Maru? Tell me...

M: Uff...

T: Do you want to cut it off here?

M: I don't know what I want

T: Then, what are you waiting for?

Matias went back to caressing Maru's head and with the same gentleness, lowered his head a bit. My girlfriend, completely excited and blinded by the moment, let herself be done and in one movement, exposed her breasts and grabbed Matias' cock, putting it in her mouth. Everything, without taking her eyes off him...sexUfff... yes... ahhhggg, how nice, I was missing you? Mmmmff... shiii? -said with the cock in her mouth- T: Yes, drink, like I was missing that tongue on my cock. Ahhggkk.. ahhhggg.. mmmmm... T: Who would have thought you'd be able to enjoy me again? jajajaja M: Shh, shut up and keep quiet... T: Come here beautiful, kneel down better than where you are uncomfortable. Matias helped her get down and Maru without hesitation, kneeled in front of this guy and put the cock back in her mouth to continue sucking it.Blow jobM: mmmmfff... what yummy cock you have
T: Do you like it? aahhhh..
M: Mmmhmmm -said without taking it away-
T: Poor your boyfriend, waiting outside..
M: Mmmm... shhhh this is debut and farewell.. mmmmfff
T: Nothing more lovely than your kisses Maru.. well, yes, that tiny beautiful ass jajaja
M: Shhh enjoy and shut up better?
Matias took off his pants and shirt in a quick movement to be more comfortable. He was very hot and had managed to get Maru, MY MARU, to suck his cock like in old times.
T: Ufff, this is divine! I missed that mouth

M: Mmm.. ahgg.. ahhccck.. yes?? I also -said while he was rubbing it for a moment and looking at her-
Matias took advantage of caressing her and putting his finger in her mouth, which Maru very gladly accepted.girlfriendHow are you ehh.. ahhh
Do you like it? ehhh??
I love it, keep drinking and give him some...
It's great to pass from talking on MSN to sucking his cock at a party. Maru had a moment of sanity and reacted in time. If she had let herself be carried away a little more, who knows what she would have done. Anyway, this didn't make her stop sucking his cock, it just increased the pace.

Maru seemed to want Matias to come either way.

Uyyy you're killing me Maru.. ufff...
Mmmmfff... mmmm.. ahhhhckk.. mmmmmmfff

My faithful girlfriend, my ideal girlfriend, kept blowing him with enthusiasm and only looked at him while he grabbed her head.storyAh yes ah yes... uffff, I love it, keep going, just a little bit until the cum, keep going.

Maru nodded slightly more at that brilliant cock full of saliva and said

Ready! -stopping-

T: Ready what?

M: Ready to drink, this is as far as it goes.

T: How? don't mess around, I'm close by

M: Mmmm not yet, this is as far as it goes. Plus, now the good stuff is coming

Maru walked away until near the door, giving Matias her back. She looked at him over her shoulder, winked at him and started slowly lifting her dress, showing off her Booty.CumA Matias's eyes went out and he smiled, licking his lips, although it was interrupted by my girlfriend.

M: But everything good ends and goes away, so bummer luck!!!

After saying this, Maru almost ran out of the bathroom, leaving Matias with his cock outside and hot; waiting for what he would never have.

Just at that moment, I walked in through the door and found my girlfriend. Maru opened her eyes wide and grabbed my arm, taking me away.

Y: Euu... what's up? where was the baby?

M: Nothing, let's go get something to drink? although you've had enough for now...

Y: Come on, girl... I didn't take much Fernet

M: Mmm yes, okay, come on let's get more Fernet

Maru took my arm and listened to the bathroom door. When I looked, I saw a girl enter, laughing with her boyfriend; so I had doubts if what I had seen before was true or not...

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