My best friend 21

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The stories advance, I hope you enjoy the fourth book of My cousin Mara. I received many messages. Thank you for the good vibes and deep analysis they make.

Remember that chronologically, this alternative version is located after chapter 41 of The Path of Temptation, as an alternate ending to the story.

The result and acceptance were better than expected, really. Now they ask me for continuations both from the third book and the fourth, je.

The main motivation for writing 2.5 was to see the degree of betrayal, disrespect, and depravity to which the character could reach. Of course, without exaggerating too much.

It took 6 months of work...

Now it's time to resume this story, which was also very requested, but between last matters and other stories I never could continue it with the attention and consistency it deserves.

I had to read everything from scratch to be able to write faithfully and cohesively.

As you know, it doesn't have much to do with the other type of stories I usually make.

Greetings and thanks

My best friend. Chapter XXI

It were two incredible weeks.

As if everything had returned to normality.

Eliana was recovering very well from the wounds suffered and face bruises almost entirely gone. The one on her lip was a bit difficult. Well, we were impeding, a bit, that part from healing, je.

The amount of kisses we gave each other was so great that we didn't allow enough time for her to recover 100%,

She still insisted that she would play the final tournament match, which, if there were no obstacles, would be in a week.

Although she was very advanced in her recovery and could run normally, there was still more time before her blows, especially those on her ribs, were ready to face a contact sport.

The team's DT didn't help much with the issue, as she told me that if I was fully recovered, I would count on her. What do I know... The doctors would have the last word... Still, I had to admit that seeing her wake up every day with that enthusiasm made it impossible to lower my expectations. She was getting very strong. So much so that I was amazed. And besides, I enjoyed watching her exercise, jeje.

I had always been stupid about her legs... God... Could she be suffering that much? In a good sense, of course. And as for Booty, I won't even mention it... That terrible apple... Bue... Another time...

As for the delinquent, there were no news. I was no longer surprised... With all his attempts in recent times and still hadn't caught him. They didn't even know who he was... That was the sad part... We had to catch him as soon as possible. The thought of it gave me terror, thinking that it was school time and many kids and girls were walking around the area, having to cross paths with that type.

Yes, of course. I wasn't afraid only for Eliana... Beyond believing that there are two without three, we lived in a very busy zone for people. Even more so, children, due to the schools in the neighborhood. Well, that Saturday afternoon, I was meeting up with Martín to have some beers. I wanted to propose something to him. And of course, find out a bit more about his plans for fatherhood.

Very well, Mr. Dad... Very well... I said, showing him the wooden cradle I had bought and was painting.

One does what one can, doesn't he? he replied.

Ah, jeje... I like seeing you enthusiastic...

Thanks, friend...

But, well... Let's hope it comes out smart, at least to mom. Because if it comes out like you... I said in a joking tone.

Why don't you go for a little walk? he asked.

I burst out laughing. We were sitting next to each other on wooden stools, with him presenting his project and me taking a cold beer from a can.

And Lau? How's she doing with all this?

... La truth is I'm doing well... At first, I was very nervous... Irritable haha... But then it was accepting the idea and now she's really happy...

YO: What good, me... I'm really glad, crazy...

MAR: And you with Eli?

I swallowed saliva.

MAR: That sparkle in your eye...

It made me laugh, you idiot.

YO: Ja... Good... It's like I still haven't gotten used to it...

MAR: Post?

YO: Yes... A lot of things happened... The final with Flavia, her strange return, the attacks on Eliana... It's like I still haven't really gotten used to the idea that we're together...

MAR: Yes... It's tremendous, friend... The things that have happened these weeks...

YO: Bad haha

MAR: But isn't it good?

YO: See... Really good... I'm really in love...

MAR: I know... You can tell...

YO: Ah, do you notice, piece of slut?-. I pushed him with my arm...

MAR: Apple... I often imagined them together...

I looked at him, strange.

Is that so?

YO: How?

MAR: Yes... Do you know? I always thought, more than her, that you liked her... Because of how she laughed at your jokes, the way she looked at you...

YO: Do you really tell me?

MAR: Yes... And besides, you're the worst at telling jokes...

I almost spit out all the beer on the wood I had just sanded.

YO: Don't be a son of a slut...

MAR: Haha... Na, posta... I always thought there was something more there...

YO: You never told me anything...

MAR: Did you want Flavia to have another reason to hate me?

YO: Go to hell...

MAR: Jeje... But they would make a couple together...

YO: Now I know... Am I a fool? No?

MAR: And... Haha... Naa... I suppose things happen at their own pace...

YO: See...

MAR: Who am I deceiving... Yes, you're a jerk, friend...-. Expressed to make me laugh again.

It was clear that he was happy the son of a slut...

YO: Suck my balls, idiot...- I said grabbing him by the neck.

MAR: When they grow up...

We looked like two 12-year-old girls...

But of course, we were just playing.

MAR: Good, good... It's over... It's over...-. Said covering his head.

YO: Tell me you're going to be a father... If I didn't break your face...

MAR: Haha, you have strength, eh... Who would have said that you'd turn into a little man already?

YO: Haha

MAR: Listen... Let's go to the important part... I looked at it... MAR: Are you still having a kid in King of Fighters?.- He exclaimed, tempted. I laughed. YO: They say that some things never change... MAR: What a vice... I could never win against him... YO: I win, but she wins more... Jeje... I have less fighting game anyway... MAR: Yes, we know you like games about horned people at your place... YO: And which ones would those be? MAR: Those of fishing... Or cooking... YO: Hahahaha... You're a son of a slut... As were the talks with Martín. Very productive... MAR: I... And that's what I wanted to tell you... Took a sip. YO: Ah... Yes... I got serious. YO: The Saturday after next, the final of Eli's championship would be played... MAR: Is he going to play? YO: I don't know... She thinks so, but it doesn't matter if he plays or not... He looked at me disoriented. Like he didn't understand. MAR: Then... YO: I have something planned... Put his beer down and focused all his attention on me. I brought my hand to my back pocket and took out a folded paper in four. I opened it and showed it to him. MAR: Who is this? YO: This sketch... Like that... Is the one who attacked Eli... Opened his eyes like a cunt. MAR: What? Did you set it up yourself? YO: See... MAR: How does he have such a masturbator's face? How did you do it? YO: As little as I remember... And Photoshop... Can you believe I sent it to the prosecutor and they didn't even answer me? MAR: After complaining when they're told they're useless... YO: Just like that... MAR: What are you going to do with this? Looked at him. YO: I have something planned... It's a bit risky, but we can do it... MAR: What thing? YO: I know you're all about the baby on the way... You can say no... But maybe we can do something... MAR: About what are you talking? ja YO: I'm sure this guy is going to go to the party on Saturday... I already saw him there... Opened his eyes very wide. MAR: How? YO: Yes, yes... I saw him there... At first, I hadn't noticed... But remembering it, I saw... Looking at the girls... He's going to come back... I'm sure... Martín was petrified. He couldn't believe what I was proposing. Although in the end, it was a little selfish of my part. I didn't really like the idea of including it that much. But also, I knew we could do something together.

MAR: Do you decide it's going to be there?

YO: I'll take my chances…

MAR: And what comes to mind?

YO: Grab him... Reduce him and call the police...

MAR: Like a citizen's arrest...

YO: Exactly...

MAR: I like that, buddy...- Expressed with a smile...

YO: Are you sure? We might not be alone... We could call some of the guys...

MAR: Forget it...

YO: Yeah, it's not easy... This guy always carries something on him... Always...

MAR: Do you say he'll be armed?

YO: I don't think so... But with a knife, he'll definitely be... He always carries something... I have proof here...- Showed my scar, lifting up my shirt.

MAR: Ugh... We have to catch that violin player...

YO: And one more thing... Nobody knows about this...

MAR: No?

YO: No... They're going to make us crap... And I don't want Eliana thinking about me instead of the championship...

MAR: Of course...

YO: So? Do we organize something?

MAR: Yeah, count on me...

YO: Okay... Let's get to work then...

MAR: Wait... What if Eliana doesn't show up to play?

YO: The game will still go on... So, the plan executes... Except for a suspension notice... But I don't think so at this point... Besides, they're publishing it on social media...

MAR: And what do we do with the cops?

YO: They've already shown themselves useless... Plus, it's an opportunity and they'll mess it up...

MAR: See...

Martín looked at the sketch.

MAR: This redhead is scary... Is he tall, isn't he?

YO: Yes, a bit taller than me...

MAR: Let's start with the basics... We set up a WhatsApp group...

YO: That's good... I think we're with 5 or 6 people...

MAR: Yeah, we have to include everyone who doubts it, Gitano...- Exclaimed to make me laugh.

YO: Ha ha, we shouldn't call attention too much...

MAR: Ha ha see...

I looked at the time. It was already getting late and I had told Eliana that we would go for a run around the block.

I wanted to leave those uncertainties behind slowly.

YO: Well... I'm going... We'll follow up on WhatsApp...

MAR: Okay, me too... Lau neither am I going to tell...
YOU: Sure he's going to come on Saturday, right?
MAR: Yes, that's why...
YOU: Okay...
We gave each other a hand like Dutch and Dillon in predator.
Plaf sounded.
Although of course, with a few less kilos of muscle...
MAR: We're going to catch him...
YOU: Forget it...
At that moment, Laura's voice is heard.
What are you two planning?
Both of us laughed.
Of course, we weren't going to tell...
I greeted both of them and left.
Now I felt much more motivated.
I had a very good feeling in my body.
If he presented himself at the place, it was ours...
I wrote to Eliana to let her know that I was already heading towards her house.
It gave me a lot of tenderness when I arrived and saw her standing at the door, waiting for me.
She was waiting there, just below the small tile roof that has the entrance to her home.
She wore black athletic leggings, white sneakers, and a long-sleeved black shirt.
Her hair, with horse's booty.
Mmm...
How beautiful she was...
YOU: What a blessing it is to have them wait like this...
Smiling, she bit her lip.
ELI: What a fool... Hello!
Lucía seemed impatient in truth.
I noticed it in her gaze.
I greeted her with a tasty kiss on the mouth.
Uff...
I felt like I was giving years of life back.
YOU: Ready, beautiful?
ELI: Sep...
YOU: Let's go...
I was jogging so I didn't need to change. Besides, I did it more to accompany her in her getting ready.
Her face was getting better and better.
It was returning to what it used to be...
The trot began...
YOU: Don't make me run too fast, I just came from drinking beer...- I said in a joking tone and acting drunk.
She looked at me laughing.
ELI: And how much did you drink?
YOU: One can...
ELI: Ah, so tender if you got drunk...- She exclaimed in the same rhythm.
That was chemistry...
YOU: Ha ha, bad...
ELI: You're beautiful... What did you do today with Martín?
At a tranquil pace, we set off together, while conversing.
YOU: We chatted for a bit... He showed me what he's preparing with Lau for when the baby arrives...
ELI: Ah, yes?
YOU: Ssee... This is... contento...
ELI: What a nice one...
YO: He told me she's going to come see you on Saturday...
ELI: Ah man...
YO: Cool...
ELI: I hope I can play...
YO: Are you getting ready for that? Or not?
ELI: Yes, but I don't know if I'll be able to start...
YO: And...- I told him like saying it makes sense.
ELI: But well, already playing is something...
YO: Obvious... Do your ribs hurt a lot?
ELI: Not much anymore... But I don't know if a collision or something similar will make me see stars...
YO: Of course, obvious... That's the problem...
ELI: It's rare for someone to grab me...- Exclaimed with an air of grandeur and smiling like a cloak.
She made me laugh.
YO: Hold on... Alex Morgan...
ELI: Who?
What girl... How she used to make me laugh!
Although if I think about it for a second, she and her team would be dancing quietly with my friends and me...
We ran around the neighborhood for about 30 minutes. When it got too dark, we went back to her house.
I saw her quite calm, honestly.
The nervousness seemed to dissipate over time and that was very good.
Although, it ended with a bit of fatigue, which was normal, she came back from running with great humor.
Already at the door of her house, she took a little break on the side.
YO: Fine?
ELI: Yes... Yes... I haven't run so much in a while...
YO: But fine? Or very fine?
ELI: Very fine, very jeje... See you tomorrow, eh...
I laughed.
YO: Ok... Ok...
We went inside and she locked the door with key and latch.
She took a few steps and opened the little water bottle she was carrying in her hand.
I saw her taking all the liquid from the container and I was mesmerized as much by her clothing as by her body.
Uff...
I was going crazy...
ELI: Haaa...- Exclaimed with relief of the refreshed...
YO: And how about the other thing? Fine?
ELI: Yes... I never had fear, but well... It's not good for a degenerate to hit you...
YO: No, obvious...
ELI: But fine... Thanks for accompanying me all this time...
YO: You don't have to thank me, bombón...
ELI: I'd eat your mouth, but I'm all sweaty...
YO: Hahaha And?
She looked at me, biting her lip.
ELI: Come here...- Expressed, Taking myself by the neck. With a lot of sweetness, she took me to her mouth and devoured my lips. Mmmm... What a spectacular sensation... Nothing like embracing the person you love. We melted into a very tasty kiss while I caressed her with great caution all over her body. It was noticeable in her movements that she was much better. And besides, she had started moving early on, even better. I ate her up whole... But that depends on who of the two tells it, je... ELI: I love you, handsome... YO: And I love you too, Queen... ELI: Beautiful... I'm going to take a shower first, je... YO: Go ahead, go ahead... It was fatal for her to walk away from me with her back turned. And even worse if it was after training. The way her booty was marked was monstrous. To grab your head. Both... Yes, she had entered into heat... And not precisely because of the trot... I sat down on the sofa waiting for my turn to bathe. Maybe in other circumstances, I would have tried to persuade her to do it with me. But since I was still feeling the physical effects of the attack, I didn't want to bother her. In that way, I spent some time messing around on the phone. Face... And it turned out very curious that a photo-recall jumped out at me, from about 5 years ago, where Eliana, I, and our group of friends were. She was standing next to me, hugging my waist and with a divine smile. Ja... Idiot! Every time I thought about it, I told myself the same thing. She always was there. Right in front of my eyes... But what do I know... Although it wasn't the same as now, she always was in my life and we shared thousands of things. Thousands... I shouldn't reproach myself for anything... I think... I remembered those moments with nostalgia, when from the corner of my eye, I observed a silhouette appear. I didn't notice at that moment. Not until I heard her voice, at least. Do you see me very sunburned yet? she exclaimed to snap me out of my mental lethargy. It was like being hit by a ton of bricks. I looked straight ahead and there was Eliana. In underwear and with wet hair hanging forward. Ouch... It was like a punch in the... breast that I felt. Opened my eyes like a cunt... God... I froze, looking at her without saying anything. That black thong, cold, left me in bed. I looked at her from below, starting from her feet, slowly moving up to her formed thighs. I segregated saliva like never before... Her perfect waist with some bruises that were still going away and the tremendous corset that held her breasts. More like it was retaining them... Uff... I felt like I was expelling boiling steam from my body in my breathing. Not even the blue color of her ribcage area was out of place. And her face.. Ohhh... ME: No, no… Almost not noticeable anymore...- I replied almost stuttering. ELI: And here?.- She pointed to the ribs on her left side. ME: Ah, a little bit here...- I swallowed saliva like a champion. ELI: And don't I have anything left, huh?.- She expressed with a half-turn and exhibiting herself almost in my face. ¡God! I was exploding... Like an idiot, I stayed looking at her legs and ass. Ufff...Unbelievable... The exercise was doing its job... What craziness! I got stupid and became like a zombie... ELI: Ah, no, nene jaja... ¡Arriba!.- He exclaimed to get me out of the trance. I wanted him to see his back, je. I returned to my body. YO: Eh... No, no... Ahí ya no tenes nada...- I replied almost drooling. ELI: What a fool! Jaja.- He laughed while looking at himself. That cold sweat that runs down your neck, which is actually beautiful, but freezes your thoughts... ELI: It's your turn...- He said going to his room. Ufff... What had just happened... Everything was swollen, so I went to take a shower. The one I had... I could feel it, even the vein that crossed my urethra, was swollen as if it were about to burst. I touched it and it burned... Uff... I already wanted to make love. But that night I didn't have a chance because he was going to meet up with friends who would spend the night there... ¡Maldición! The desire I had to put her on top of me and devour her whole. Of course, I would have to wait. But what better than to feed the flame so it could be extinguished in the best possible way? God... How in love I was... And with this soccer game coming up, I felt like I had to take charge of the situation. Protect her... And at the same time, get a dangerous guy off the streets. I finished showering and changed to go out. Jean blue, black sweater and my leather jacket of the same color. I didn't have anything to do, so I was going to stay home. That's why Eli's comment amused me. ELI: And where are you going looking so handsome? Ja... YO: Home... But did you see? You have to keep the style... ELI: You can stay if you want... YO: Naa... Re clavo... ELI: Jaja... YO: I'll take advantage and catch up with my studies... ELI: Well... But we'll write each other anyway YO: Obvio, hermosa...- I said taking her by the waist. She looked at me and for a moment didn't seem real, je. We were together! Incredible... So many years being just friends... I think it was only now that I began to realize our present. Just now... What... joy... Really... After this next Saturday, I'll dedicate myself fully to us. No more third parties... No more exes... No more delinquents... Only us... I was imploring for a good result. It had to be like that! It was the only way for Eliana to be 100% calm. And I would do everything possible to make it so, no matter what it costs! I said goodbye to her after a few kisses, je. It was tremendous how I managed to detach myself from her little body. And to top it off, the pants she was wearing didn't help me too much to take my attention away from there. Hearing her I love you, handsome was unique. I drove home thinking about everything that happened to us in the last few weeks. Like a movie... And no matter how hard I tried to concentrate on university things, it wasn't long before I gave myself fully to the day's party issue. Martín had set up a WhatsApp group and included some friends who didn't have any problem helping us out. That way, we started forging the crude of what would be our ambitious plan for life. For a good while, we were at full steam, brainstorming strategy to reduce (eventually) that scribe. Everything was going to come to nothing if the guy didn't show up, right? But something was already taking shape... See... How nice... More about the night, Eliana wrote me. ELI: What are you doing, love? ELI: 😊 YO: Hanging out at home Boludeando YO: How's your night??? ELI: Fine, we ordered pizza and watched some movies YO: That's cool... Save a laugh ELI: Good jaja YO: I'd be missing you already... ELI: 🤩 YO: You're beautiful, I also YO: How do you feel? ELI: Really well, the only thing that bothers me is that place on my ribs nothing more YO: I'm really glad YO: When I first saw you... YO: I don't want to remember it ELI: Oh no! ELI: Nothing to see... The eye thing almost faded away YO: Yes, you're re divine... With or without punches YO: 😍 ELI: Jajaja YO: Today I looked at you and... ELI: And what? YO: 😳 ELI: Jajajaja YO: Better not tell ELI: Oh, I'd really like to know 😏
YO: Ah, okay?
ELI: Sip
YO: Now?
ELI: Yes, the girls talk 😁
I was already getting comfortable in bed for what was going to happen...
To be honest, I got too motivated having these kinds of conversations with Eliana. It was incredibly wild.
YO: When you came out of the bathroom in underwear
YO: Ufff…
ELI: Ah, okay?
YO: Yes
YO: And then, when we kissed before I left
YO: I love how your boxers stay 🥵
ELI: And I like how your leather jacket stays
ELI: 😘
YO: Beautiful…
YO: I had a strong desire to make love with you
ELI: I do too
ELI: 😳
Apa…
The thing was getting heavy.
YO: Don't tell me that, or I won't be able to sleep
ELI: Why? 🙄
YO: Ha ha ha
ELI: What are you laughing at?
YO: I'm going to eat you whole…
ELI: When? jaja
Ay, God…
Unexplainable what it generated in me.
YO: If it were up to me, now
ELI: Well, now they're gone jajaja
YO: Ha ha ha
ELI: Tomorrow after running, we could get into bed and give each other many kisses…
My cock was standing under my clothes.
A madness.
YO: Yes?
ELI: Sip…
ELI: Do you want?
YO: Yes, without clothes if possible…
ELI: Epaaaaa
ELI: I like that ❤️
Tremendous…
No words…
YO: You're tasty too
YO: All!!!
ELI: You're tasty also jajaja
It made me laugh.
Like a fool, I was laughing alone.
YO: Ha ha ha beautiful
ELI: Nice, my hero 😍
YO: Really?
ELI: More than yes
ELI: I'm already looking forward to tomorrow
YO: And I, don't give you an idea
ELI: Do you like me?
I stayed.
What was it referring to?
YO: Eh?
YO: How do you like me? What's that question jaja
ELI: I say 😊
YO: Are you crazy? You have me stupidized jaja
ELI: Jajaj yes? Do you really say that?
YO: Of course! How can you ask that??
ELI: I don't know jaja
YO: All of me likes… The companion that you are… The funny, independent... Entertaining...
YO: So many things…
ELI: Meant something else 🙈
YO: What?? jaja
ELI: It makes me blush jaja
My heart was beating a lot.
I had gotten quite disoriented by her question. I got moved.
Now, I'm nervous to the fullest.
YO: Tell meeeeeee
ELI: If you like me when we're... juntos... What?
YO: Are you serious with me right now?????
ELI: My body... I...
Uffff...
I loved it, on one side, talking about these things.
But not that I doubt...
YO: ME
YO: EN
YO: CAN
YO: TASSSSSSSS
ELI: Hahaha
ELI: Really, Joo?
YO: You're beautiful... You have a divine body... A dreamy smile
YO: Don't make me blush, please...
ELI: I love you!!!
YO: Me too...
ELI: Now I'm craving more tomorrow 😳
YO: I'd show you the effect on me but it would be very cheesy of my part
ELI: 😲😲😲😲😲😲
YO: Post...
YO: I'm the one who has no idea why you gave me a hard-on jaja
ELI: Oh, if you're handsome...
ELI: Everything...
YO: Today I was looking at your legs... The Booty... I almost died there in your house
ELI: How nice what you say
ELI: 😊
YO: And me?
ELI: What about you, love?
YO: Do you like me? jaja
ELI: 😏
YO: Hahaha
ELI: You eat everything, friend...
ELI: Now I'm off to the chori
ELI: 😜
Almost spit it out.
The erection I had was bigger than River's stadium.
Did he really say that?
I love you...
YO: Now I want more for it to be tomorrow
YO: A desire to feel you naked on top of me...
ELI: 😳😳😳😳
ELI: 🙈🙈🙈🙈
I went to hell.
But that's how it came out.
That conversation was killing me.
YO: Sorry, I bailed jaja
ELI: Beautiful... I really like you, did you know?
YO: Bomba, what luck I have jaja
ELI: Hunger... I'm going to leave you for a bit because the girls are driving me crazy already
YO: Ah yes? jaja
ELI: Yes, and I just got all red 🙊
YO: Hahaha good
ELI: Better to leave it there
ELI: For now 😉
YO: I like you so much...
YO: Diossss jaja
ELI: Beautiful
ELI: You to me... If we don't talk today
ELI: See you tomorrow!!
YO: Okay, enjoy with the girls
YO: A kiss, I love you!!
ELI: Thanks
ELI: I love you more!
ELI: 😘😘😘😘
YO: ❤️
It was my last message that night.
Tremendous what that person you love so much can cause in just two minutes...
Now how did I... To lower the temperature? Ah... Maybe it was happening to her too, just like it was to me... The truth was that the next day, divine things were going to happen...