Chapter 6 My cousin Mara

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If you haven't read My cousin Mara: The path of temptation don't go any further...
I'm leaving the complete sixth chapter of the third part of the story. It will always be subject to some final review, so it may have some added later and corrections.
Although the main idea of the chapter is there.
Saludos!!
PD: I won't upload all of them, eh... I only do it because the wait is getting long jeje
I'm almost done with 40 chapters. It's almost over...
CHAPTER VI
What?
Almost jumped out of bed to the floor.
I didn't understand anything.
How did she do that in her job? And like that…
I was silent for a while, thinking…
I didn't know what to say.
MAR: Yes... A disaster, I know 😞
YO: Post? I can't believe what you're telling me...
MAR: Yes, although it sounds terrible. I did it.
MAR: I had no control... After doing that and cum, we were together at home... It didn't stop...
YO: 😳
MAR: It was an uncontrollable hunger...
YO: And if someone saw us?
MAR: I don't know, maybe thinking about it made me do it better jaja
YO: I knew you wanted to try new things... But I never imagined that happened to you... At that level... You should have told me...
MAR: Are you crazy? jaja With what face?
YO: And now you're telling me...
MAR: Now it's different, you know. Besides, we're talking on WhatsApp
MAR: In person I couldn't tell you 😅
MAR: Sometimes I would take pictures... Then I would delete them 🙈
YO: I feel more relaxed now...
MAR: Why?
YO: I feel less of a masturbator now....
MAR: Jajajaja
MAR: Basta already 😣
YO: Jajaja
MAR: You made me laugh 😊
I got a goofy face.
YO: Look at yourself...
MAR: You know the shame I feel telling it to the psychologist... This degenerate girl must think.
YO: Do you tell her everything?
MAR: Little by little, yes...
YO: And what does she say?
MAR: Basically, she consoles me... What do I know... It feels that way.
YO: Why do you say What consoles you?
MAR: Because it doesn't say How did you do that? haha
MAR: It says if something had to happen, it's okay and things like that...
YO: Maybe she has a point...
MAR: I don't know... Now, I'll tell you no, it's not my essence...
YO: I know you well enough... You don't have to doubt yourself... If I don't like something you've done, it doesn't mean it's bad for you...
MAR: I think I've talked too much today... Thanks for reading me 😊
YO: All good...
MAR: I needed to talk to you... Actually, something else I need, but okay...
God.
I didn't want her to say that.
The fever that caught me with what she told me was going to make me send someone later I would regret it.
YO: I also liked talking to you...
Neither in hell would I tell her I had a cock harder than a graphite rock.
MAR: I love you ❤
How did I respond to that?
It wasn't a lie, I loved her.
But not like to put it in a conversation.
YO: Me too 😊
I didn't want her to think everything was fine.
But neither did I want to make fun of her.
MAR: See you tomorrow 😘😘
YO: See you tomorrow, rest 😉
MAR: 🤗
I took a deep breath.
At least she stayed calmer than that earlier day.
But do I worry so much about what's happening now?
Just thinking about what I saw... What torture!
The more tender she got with me, the worse it was for me.
Because my head kept thinking and thinking, reliving scenes.
And they were all of hers.
I hooked up with three of her friends. It's true.
But I wasn't thinking about them or going back to do it with them.
Of course, yes with Sabrina. But it was different with her.
But I didn't want Fernanda or Gabriela either.
I didn't want to get together with them to hook up or imagine what could happen to them.
I wasn't lying when I said I got with them, without really wanting to.
I enjoyed it, yes.
But it wasn't something I desired. Something I died for doing.
Instead, Mara, yes, I desired trying that experience...
And she did it... With extremes...
That didn't let me live in peace.
The fact always would be a wall between us...

It was going to be like that with someone else. Unfortunately, it would be that way. And it hurt every instant to remember it.

And then there's the issue of having fallen in love with her friend.

I knew it was terrible that it had happened to me.

It was her friend...

Although the circumstances weren't normal. Because they weren't.

She also let me stay with her. Without mentioning that Sabrina, it was her first lesbian experience.

Unbelievable how it sounds.

Nothing good came out of all that. Post.

It was only a matter of time before everything fell apart.

Better, I tried to sleep.

Lorena didn't write to me.

She must have arrived tired. Or simply didn't feel like it, je.

She was like that...

The next day, I felt a bit stronger.

I had breakfast and moved around fairly well.

It seemed like my body was starting to respond slowly.

I changed and went out onto the street to see if I could go for a run.

It was risky doing it alone but what else mattered? I was sick of being cooped up.

I walked for a bit, first.

As I saw that everything was fine, I tried to speed up a bit.

I didn't feel bad. Not really.

I got a bit tired, but I think that's normal.

So I kept going.

I greeted a couple of neighbors.

It seemed like Rocky, je.

Already at the two blocks running, yes, I started to get agitated a bit.

I slowed down.

That was enough for what I was doing.

I walked a couple of blocks until a square.

I sat down for a bit to take some water.

I heard the sound of birds, felt my blood flowing.

Of being lost because you're an ass with wheels...

I rested for a few minutes and decided to go back running.

Since I wasn't fat, but quite the opposite, I didn't feel that heavy.

My hair was dripping.

And I was pale.

But I kept going.

I arrived calmly, without demanding too much from myself.

I no longer felt that numbness in my legs and arms.

Although, also, I couldn't pretend to be fine.

I took a shower, no problem.

I felt energetic!

I grabbed the phone and saw that Lorena had written to me.

Yesterday I arrived exhausted, sorry
How is my... What's up, little donkey? I found it funny. ME: Everything bad, eh!! Ha ha ME: What are you doing?? LOR: Nooo LOR: Let me make it up to you!! ME: Ah yes? How? LOR: :) ME: I like where this is going... The next one was a picture of her. Wow! Almost dropped my phone. God... What the heck... Chapter 6 My cousin MaraWhat a slut! I thought. It stopped working for me. ME: You're terrible... How much I want to tear you apart... Very yummy... LOR: Yes? I'm forgiven... ME: I'm coming over to your house, sweetie... LOR: Ha ha if you could, just once... ME: I just came from running... So forget that I can... LOR: Posture? Sure? ME: See... How much I want to grab her who gave me. Bad... LOR: Sure? And if it hurts you? ME: I don't think so... But we'll stop... LOR: Mmm.... ME: Send another photo, beautiful, give me some because I have a craving... LOR: Opa... How are we 😳 ME: It's been a long time since I saw you...BreastsUfff... What a fever that caught me. Like something lit up inside of me.

LOR: I'm waiting for you like this, naked, want to?

YO: Yes, baby... I'm coming out there... You're divine...

LOR: With one condition...

YO: Which one?

LOR: If you let me suck your cock for a good while...

LOR: I have a craving 😋

Uff... Shit... How I missed these things. Now that I was doing them, I remembered. What tasty...

YO: It's been a long time since they sucked me... Give it all to you, baby...

LOR: Come on! 😈😈

Shit that got me hot. Some desire to fill her with cum gave me. I changed and perfumed myself. I felt a heat in my body. It had been a while since I was with someone. Since Sabrina... Little did it matter that I had to take out the Holter for it, not mentioning the circumstance of taking medication also.

I got into the car and left for Lorena's house.

YO: I'm already there... - I wrote.

LOR: Mmm... Finally, I'll see you again. It seemed like old times. Only hoped nothing would happen. Already I saw myself with chest pain, feeling embarrassed. That was the only thing that worried me.

I arrived at the house. Think about how the last time I was with her, I had cum on her that wasn't for her... I felt a bit strange, but I had many desires to get it on. Too many...

When I arrived, she received me in a way that left me frozen. Naked, she opened the door. With a cat-in-heat face, tremendous. God... I stood there looking at her with an incredible stupid face. First because it had been a while since I saw her in person, and second, because she was really slutty.

YO: Hi...

She hugged me, greeting me.

LOR: You told me you'd be waiting like this...

I didn't stop staring at her boobs. They seemed fuller. I bit my tongue. Like an unbridled one, I grabbed the back of her neck to give her a kiss. LOR: Mmmm haha... I ate her mouth. But badly. She opened her lips and sent my tongue to die. At the same time, I was unbuckling the jean belt.

LOR: Are you ready for a yummy cock-sucking, my love?

Uff... My heart rate was already accelerating.

YO: Yes, beautiful... Some Longing to see you. Are you going to suck me a lot?.- I said biting the skin of her mouth, something excited.

LOR: Until you're done...

YO: Ah, yes?

LOR: Ajam... If it's like you say, you must have a lot of cum accumulated...

She expressed with a tremendous slut voice.

It was evident that she had terrible desires for me.

She lowered my pants and boxer together. One.

LOR: Mmm... Come sit down here on the couch.

My cock standing, looked stretched and hard.

She grabbed me and took me to the sofa.

What a beautiful feeling.

I sat while looking at her excitedly.

LOR: Jeje... These legs.- She exclaimed while passing her palms, caressing them.

My member was in the middle, like a mast.

YO: You're a goddess...

She was prepared for when I arrived, since she left a mirror just in front of me so that I could see everything while she petted me.

What a girl...

I began to make her sigh.

LOR: I don't know what I missed this piece...- She said while looking at me biting herself.

I still hadn't grabbed her.

YO: Yes?

LOR: Yes, bombón...

She liked to talk dirty.

Always did.

And it really turned me on hearing her.

LOR: Can I suck you?.- She expressed more slut than ever, gesturing.

I followed the game...

YO: Mmm, I don't know... Do you think you deserve it?

LOR: Please, yes... Just for a little while can I?

YO: Let me think...

She was caressing me closer and closer.

LOR: I promise to suck you well... Okay?

YO: And what are you going to do with the cum?

A grimace appeared on her face.

LOR: You'll see...

She rushed at me.

The divine pleasure I felt in the moment when her mouth enveloped my cock was indescribable.

A warm, wet heat that went from the tip to the base of my member.

YO: Ooohhh...- I moaned like I hadn't done in a long time.

I closed my eyes and started enjoying.

Her head rose and fell, squeezing my trunk.

Mm mm mm she was saying.

What madness...

I had forgotten how delicious Lorena's blow job was.

I opened my eyes a little and saw her face of concentration, her lips making a trumpet sound and her terrible butt naked in the mirror. For the moment, I felt great. Me let go for a moment to breathe. LOR: Haa… How much I want to eat this meat you have, nene… Omm… Grabbed her tiny ass that had on her hair. Enjoying, I started going down and up her head. YO: Ohh… I love it… LOR: Mmm… Do you remember that last photo I sent you? omm omm.- Expressed while making me a hellish blow job. I remembered. YO: The one you sent with your face full of cum, in the mirror? LOR: Mmm yes jeje… The same... YO: Terrible picture... Why? LOR: My ex saw it... mmmm.- Savored well the tip with her lips. How? Did she see it? YO: Ohh…- Made me moan loudly. YO: How did she see it? LOR: Yes, without wanting... She was in a pen and when he put it on, she saw it...- Said looking at me with my cock taken well from below, and at the same time that she passed her tongue around in circles. YO: Nooo… LOR: Yes... Ummm... It was quite annoying for about two weeks jeje... Me killed that she told me that... Made me put it on harder. YO: Haha I imagine... LOR: But good, I didn't delete it jaja. YO: Ah no? LOR: Not even crazy... I love that photo...- Smiled and went back to eating the piece. Each time more hot I felt it. YO: You're terrible... LOR: Yes, terrible slut… jajaja.- Laughed. The way she was putting it in her mouth... What exquisite taste. After so much time, we had seen each other again. 'Mm mm mm' YO: You'll make me cum if you keep going like this... Oohh... LOR: Em… That's the idea!... How beautiful you are... Me left content that it got as hard as always. But also played the circumstance of not having jerked off for a long time, and the cum was bigger. YO: Oohh… A little with the tits... God...- Was killing me. LOR: You're still perverted like always. ¡Bien! jeje Opened her mouth and left a lot of saliva on my head and trunk. Shit, it was dripping. I looked at her and she laughed. LOR: Like this, my love?.- Put a tremendous golfa face and put her breasts over my cock. I couldn't believe it. Too tasty everything was. Felt like my penis was sliding over those precious boobs. She was going up and down, perfecting a huge Boobs fuck. I closed my eyes to concentrate. She was having me very well. LOR: Do you like it, nene? Almost without voice I answered yes, that she keep going. The way she was lifting and lowering the skin of the glans, all wet, was very pleasant. To make matters worse, when she was more big breasted, she felt herself. I relaxed for a few seconds, which were very comforting. LOR: Mmm... That little face... - Her agitated breathing could be heard. LOR: Do you have a lot of cum for me? YO: You don't have any idea... LOR: What's tasty! I want! Just then I was about to come. Very rigid she felt. LOR: I'm going to keep sucking it a little, okay? YO: Aa... Suck it all! - I came. At any moment, I would release everything. The things she said to me... I had forgotten the blowjobs we were giving each other. Ummmm was heard when she swallowed again. She was sending herself whole. Nothing mattered to her. There was always a serial cum-eater. YO: God... haha... You're killing me... LOR: Once I have it, I'll get every last drop out of it, baby... Ufff... I was bursting with love... Not love for me. If not for my cock. That had given her so much pleasure many times before. YO: I can't take it anymore, I can't take it anymore... She started bobbing up and down quickly. Good porn video, looking down and pressing her lips. Seeing her like that in front of the mirror was madness. Ecstasy was just around the corner. Suddenly she let go, completely. I opened my eyes. What happened? I wondered. She was there, crouched down, biting her lips and touching her clitoris. She was masturbating. YO: Come on, bombón, I'll suck it all... A ammm she made a gesture, saying no. The heat she had was gone. YO: No? Alone started to moan, while my cock throbbed in front of her. She grabbed me with her other hand and continued to masturbate with the other. She didn't want me to do it to her. God... The face she made was incredible. She was masturbating, masturbating me... All flushed out. Totally surrendered. She started to shake more. I loved seeing her like that. Until

Again, my cock went into her mouth. But she didn't stop touching herself. She killed me... I didn't imagine she had that much heat. Or maybe it was because I had lost something on the court, I don't know. ME: Come here, give me your tiny ass... But she wasn't stopping from giving herself a hand. I saw her rubbing through the reflection. Tremendous... What a desire for her to get up and bury everything in my member. Not even talking. She was breathing and sighing, agitated, making mmm without stopping. My god it burned... Until she started moaning with my cock in her mouth. But bad moaning. To the point of screaming and furrowing her brow. Mmmmmmmmmmmmm. - She repeated over and over again as if she were being killed. I couldn't take it anymore. I twisted like a madman, with her lips compressing my cock. It was like a volcanic eruption that emanated from me. I remember closing my eyes and enjoying nicely. Aaaa I exclaimed. I heard the satisfaction I provoked. I had emptied myself. I breathed deeply with some palpitations that didn't yield to pleasure. When I opened my eyes, I saw the result. She was smiling with a tremendous perverted face. Her mouth, nose, and part of her cheek were covered in semen. But it didn't end there, a thick thread hung from her like a river's current on her breasts. An immense amount of cum. Impressive... Lorena lifted me up and down slowly, with a look of pleasure. I swallowed saliva and breathed a bit. Terrible cum had stuck to her. LOR: Mmmm... Someone came loaded jeje YO: I told you... - It barely came out of my mouth. LOR: I love it... I could hear the sound of her tongue, collecting pieces of semen that hung from her. What a daughter of a thousand... I was relaxing too much when I felt something else. She put on a condom with her mouth. Not much had come down yet. Just a little bit. And when I perceived the prophylactic on my skin, accompanied by her lips, I decided to continue. As far as it would go, I thought. I didn't care about anything. Oohnn oon I exclaimed, introducing everything into her. Little by little, I remembered... what were ejaculations with Lorena. Flapping... It was like that for a few moments. I had my whole face smeared and fluids dripping. When the cock got hard again, she passed her hand over my face and did the maneuver to climb on me. LOR: Mmm… Now yes…- Expressed like a predator. Putting her tits in my face for an instant, she placed her legs beside me. I was a spectator with benefits. I was completely relaxed. And when she put it on... Ufff... She had a tremendous face. She furrowed her brow and bit her lower lip, as if tasting the most delicious chocolate in the world. God... It felt quite tight, as it went down slowly. I leaned my head against her breasts. I didn't care that they were impregnated with semen and saliva. LOR: Aaaa.... yes, baby... What pleasure! Ooohh... LOR: How long has it been since I've buried this cock...- She said with a slutty voice. The expression on her face showed the great moment she was living. She began to moan every time she sat down completely. She loved screaming. Aa a aa aa aa repeated without stopping. I hugged her around the waist while, very slowly, I started licking one of her tits. LOR: Ah, yes! Suck my tits well, give it... Ooooii.. oo... I was like a kid. Almost didn't talk. I listened to her and every time, I got higher. Her nipple was very hard. It showed that she liked having sex with me. LOR: Ah... What tasty!... Aaa... She was flying... YO: Mmmm you're yummy! Mmm...- I kept eating her tits a little harder. LOR: Do you like my tits, sweetie? Ehh?.- She bit while riding. YO: Yes, your tits are very yummy... Can I bite them? She groaned. LOR: Oohh... Bite me, baby... I put her in my mouth and looked at her. With the tip of my tongue, I outlined the contour of her tasty nipple. She was looking very excited. Slowly, I closed my mouth until I lightly pinched the pointy yummy and hard nipple with my teeth. She let out a loud scream. Aaaaaaa... Then she sucked it back in. LOR: Ah, no... aaaa. She exclaimed making force. Is she going to cum? Her pussy was squeezing my cock. She threw herself on top of me suddenly and ate my mouth. Ooom Amm. It was very hot. It seemed like she hadn't come in centuries. She made a bit of force to pull me sideways. She reclined me against the couch. As it was quite large, it could be likened to a bed. Her face, totally red, showed that at any moment, she would reach her climax. Very hot, she pulled my cock out from inside. She looked at me with a face of an assassin wrapped in luxury and turned around. All her tasty bum remained before my eyes. She was going to sit down backwards... God... From my position, I watched as she sat down on my erect cock with her back to me. I felt good, honestly. And clearly, all the physical effort was hers. I grabbed her waist and after she had slowly thrust her cock again, she kept jumping over me. Plaf plaf could be heard, and she didn't stop screaming loudly. LOR: Do you mind that I scream like a slut, baby? YO: No... I love it, beautiful... LOR: Aaaa aaa.... Is this okay? Ummmm... - She screamed. It was a sexual topadora. YO: Are you going to give me a cumshot? LOR: Oohh... Don't be bad... You're going to make me cum... The way we were having sex was very yummy. Posta. Her belt, taken by me, was becoming red. YO: Very degenerate, masturbating while I sucked your cock, eh! LOR: Ay, no! Enough... aaa... YO: Mmmm how you fingered me... Do you like it, pervert? LOR: Aaaa... Oohhhhh... She was about to come. To make matters worse, she jumped even harder, as she controlled herself less due to the heat. YO: I'd like to put some toy in your Booty for next time when you throw the rubber, beautiful... When she heard that, she howled. Aiiiii, noo Super agitated and making force like never before, she went forward. She twisted herself around. LOR: Damned... aaaa... - She expressed as the best. She was breathing heavily as if she had run 100 km, thrown against the front of the sofa. My cock, still hard, was inside her. Her breathing was very agitated. YO: That's was talking… mmmm...
She caressed me on the Booty.
Flower of butt had…
It was a minute long, trying to recover her breath.
A big mess had stuck.
Right there in the position she was in, pulling ass, badly, I felt like getting up and sticking it in someone's tiny ass.
In a very horny way, she lifted one leg and pulled my cock out from inside.
Her relaxation face was so great that I was surprised.
She was laughing, a little at the embarrassment, I suppose.
She put herself on top of me, with her arms to the sides and, all red, gave me a kiss on the mouth.
Short.
Then she got off my cock.
With her right hand, she pulled out the condom.
She threw it away and looking at me like a cat, took my whole lubricated member in her hand.
I exclaimed: Ohh...
She started sucking me.
LOR: I told you I was going to suck your cock a lot, didn't I?
God… What cutie…
I laughed and put my arm behind my head.
Thought it was time to enjoy.
“Omm” she said when she went back in between her lips. She had just come and started again.
After a long time, I was enjoying a yummy blowjob.
I don't know how much time had passed since she started sucking me off.
It was so relaxing that when I finished, I stayed lying down like that.
What nice…
I was extremely ecstatic. But too much.
And then I fell asleep!
Yes, incredibly, I fell asleep.
I think it was a mix of everything.
But it wasn't until a long time later that I woke up.
Maybe it was the effort, also, I don't know.
But I got up.
I was alone there.
I put on my pants and walked around the house.
Lorena had gone to do some things of hers.
There were drawings and fabrics on the table.
Me: Ha ha, I fell asleep!- I said stretching.
LOR: Yes, bad… You left me after your effort jaja
Me: You should have woken me up…
LOR: It doesn't bother me... Are you tired?
Me: A little bit more than that… Must be part of this… Do you like it?
LOR: Of course!- She said smiling.
She was sitting at the table.
She didn't even look at me, but I think she already had to leave.
Me: Yes?
LOL: Ahah... Better than I thought haha
YOU: Haha yeah I didn't have much faith...
LOL: No but you saw... It's not what happened to you that's the joke...
I was thinking inside, you didn't think that while you were jumping like crazy all over me je.
YOU: Well, I'm going to go then...
LOL: Do you want to eat or drink something before?
YOU: No, no thanks...- I bent down and gave her a kiss on the mouth. Umm she did.
Then I looked for my sweater and sneakers.
LOL: You were missed, guy, eh!
YOU: Haha it was nice...
LOL: Bad... When you want...- And he winked at me.
YOU: Haha
That's what it was for her. A fuck...
And I didn't give a damn about it.
A small friendship with sex.
At 5 minutes already in my car, changed and ready to leave for home.
I looked at the cell phone to see the time.
It had gotten late already.
How hot...
Where did I get her from? je...
And it didn't surprise me much when I observed the hours I had been with Lorena. Which were more than five.
If not the amount of missed calls and messages I had.
From my mom, my brother, and also from Mara.
Where are you? My mom called
It's all fine?
I'm worried.
Is it that much?
And a new call was coming in.
Yes, it was her.

13 comentários - Chapter 6 My cousin Mara

JukUik
Estuvo interesante el capítulo, nada del otro mundo pero interesante, lo único que confirme, a mi entender, es que la aparición de Lorena va a complicar todo, justo como me lo temía, ojalá y cuando Mara se entere no se vaya a mandar unaa cagada monumental con algún pibe conocido (F#4NC0?¡?¡?¡) por culpa de los celos, y ahí si se muera el poco cariño/amor que le queda a Jonas hacia ella... o que hago algo tipo así lo del sueño que tuvo Jonas donde la reventaban entre varios...
JukUik +1
@emmaq Cn respecto a lo d Sabrina, justmnt eso lo estaba comntando ayer cn otro usuario q sigue sta historia, le dcía q para mí, Jonás no está enamorado d Sabrina, simplemnt se refugió n ella x todo lo q estaba sucediendo n su relación cn Mara, y al encntrar n ella todo lo q ants le daba Mara (ya q sabrina si está enamoradisima d Jonás) pues el se agarró d ahí para coger la fuerza y tomar la decisión d terminar con Mara cuando vió todo lo q sucedió n el baño entre Mara y Franco
emmaq
@JukUik en que parte casi le hace la cola franco a mara? Esa parte me la perdi o me la pase por alto como un bolu
JukUik
@emmaq te respondí al chat explicandote por que digo que Franco estuvo a punto de romperle el orto a Mara (Ya que eso es una opinión mia, puede que pienses igual o puede que no).
JukUik
Jajajaja, por supuesto, apuesto a que gozas un montón, te compras una coca-cola, un paquete de frituras de tu preferencía, y mantienes el matecito preparado mientras lees todas las locuras que se nos ocurren JAJAJA. Saludos capo! No tardes tanto en sacar el libro que nos tienes en ascuas...
Excelente como siempre amigo..!!👏👏👏 Por lo visto a jonas le gusta jugar con fuego..q se aguante las consecuencias..
@hiphop911 todo está en sus manos maestro.. nosotros solo suponemos ,mientras esperamos el libro o la continuación de estos adelantos..
Jugando con fuego???, Jonas no tiene nada con Mara, es ella la que está pendiente de el y lo busca
emmaq +2
@hiphop911 jonas esta en como y es todo un sueño? Jeje. Me encanto lo de que jonas se despertaba todo sudado despues de tener pesadillas en los libros. Eso le pasa a muchas personas con problemas cardiacos. Lindo detalle si fue adrede
JukUik
@hiphop911 Cada vez que haces un comentario así de que "no estamos preparados para lo que viene", siento que aumentan las probabilidades de que pasen algunas de mis ideas locas como:
- Que Jonás en su capricho de no coger con Mara para como el dice "no darle falsas esperanzas", la cague en grande empezando de loco a coger con cuanta mujer haya y termine hiriendo los sentimientos de Mara, y ahí si Mara decida mandar todo al carajo y vivir su vida loca también y quedemos todos aburridos sin reconciliación y ellos viviendo sus vidas por separado.
- Salga 1 video de Mara siendo enfiestada, o videos de Jonás cogiendo con Lorena o ocn otras minas.
- Resulte que Mara se junta como novia con Franco.
- Mara cogió con Franco varias veces en el trancurso de estas 4-5 semanas que van del 3er libro, despues de la juntada fatidica.
- Llega Sabrina en medio de la reconciliación de Mara y Jonas (Algún suceso que tenga que ver con Sabrina, tipo que está embarazada (aunque muy improbable) o algo así).
- Que se filtren las fotos y videos del grupo que tienen Mara y sus amigas, y que Fernanda no le haya cumplido a Mara el pedido de borrar las fotos y videos donde ella sale (Esto traería un MONTÓN de problemas y discusiones en la familia de Mara y de Jonás).

Por ultimo 2 cosas, una de ellas me decepcionaría de parte del personaje de Jonás y la segunda sería una vaina tripleloca que veo muy dificil...
- Que Jonás y Mara se reconcilien y que vuelvan a las mismas andanzas por las que se pelearon en un principio, es decir, que vuelvan a ir a juntarse con Fernanda y las amigas de Mara en esas fiestas locas donde Fer, o que empiecen una relación "abierta" donde al final, alguno de los 2 termine herido. (Me parecería la mayor estupidez que podría hacer el personaje de Jonás despues de repetir una y otra vez lo que sufría cuando se le pasaba la calentura y recordaba a Mara cogiendo con otros hombres).
- Que Mara resulte estar embarazada y no nos digas si es de Jonás o de alguien más (esto sería muy improbable ya que Mara toma anticonceptivos y no creo que pase, pero no sería el primer caso donde estos fallan, y esto de seguro nos dejaría en shock a la mayoría).
“He visto 47 mil futuros diferentes” 🤣
JukUik
JAJAJAJA. Sos malo bro!😂😂😂
@hiphop911 que no eran 14 millones seicientos cinco finales ?
Ahora que lo pienso mejor me callo
Y ahora que hace Jonas???,le dice la verdad a Mara???,no tiene porqué darle explicaciones,tal vez se lo oculte para no lastimarla
JukUik +1
@Nemocabezon ...En el punto n el q va la historia yo veo muerta esa relación, q suceda en 2,3 o 4 meses, solo lo sabrá hiphop911).


Si Jonás ya no quiere nada con ella debería decircelo de frente y no dejar que Mara siga mortificandose y preocupandose por el (eso no me parece justo y estoy de acuerdo con lo que tu dices)
@JukUik es a lo q voy.. si Jonas no quiere más nada con mara.. q se lo diga de frente ..q ella no se haga más falsas ilusiones y re haga su vida.. sin estar pendiente de él...eso es lo q tiene q hacer Jonas si en verdad no quiere ni siente más nada por ma
@Nemocabezon no es lo mismo pero está igual de mal, porque si estuviera bien porque lo oculta?, porque está mal es lo mismo,no justifiquemos a Mara,estuvo mal,se equivocó, ahora tiene que enfrentar las consecuencias
JukUik +1
@Nemocabezon Y por favor, así como dices que yo "odio" a Mara, Tu le estas justificando a ella lo injustificable. Ella era la que decía que era solo sexo, y terminó obsesionándose con Franco, y apuesto que hasta empezó a sentir algo mas. Si llevar a Jonás a una reunión donde ella complotó con sus amigas para que una no terminara con el novio y así Franco fuera otra vez a la reunion, y la otra para que hiciera que todos se hicieran exámenes de sangre para coger sin cuidarse y que esta le dijera a Franco que no descargara la leche por mas de 2 semana para que le rellenara todos los huecos a Mara y la dejara escurriendo leche por 1 mes, y resulta que el ÚNICO que no sabe es el que puede resultar mas perjudicado, no es ENGAÑAR, la verdad no se para ti que es el engaño.

Si prepararse el orto por mas de 2 semanas para que se lo rompan, si tragar la leche de Franco, si dejar y mas que todo QUERER que Franco le llenara el útero de leche (porque si sucedió es porque ella también lo quería, por algo hacer todo esa telaraña de engaños junto a Fernanda para al fin coger sin forros con él, eso no fue un accidente como ella lo quiso hacer ver), cuando Jonás le repitió una y otra vez que no quería que ella hiciera nada de eso, esas 3 cosas Jonás le dejó en claro a Mara desde un principio que eran limites inamovibles que no iban a cambiar, y que aparte lo hiciera a espaldas de Jonás, no es ENGAÑAR a tu pareja, me estás tomando por IMBECIL y disculpame la expresión.

Mas aún cuando Jonás nunca quiso ir a esa reunión, Mara duró mas de 2 semanas intentando convencerlo y terminó decidiendo que la única opción que le quedaba era manipularlo con la presencia de Sabrina, a pesar que ella sabía que sabrina estaba sintiendo cosas por Jonás (y resulta que despues se molestó con ella, porque Sabrina le hizo saber que no estaba bien lo que ella estaba planeando o planeó y lo que estaba haciendo con Franco, porque apuesto lo que quieras que a Sabrina tampoco le dijeron nada sobre lo de coger sin forros y apuesto lo que quieras que por eso se dió esa discusión y ese fue el motivo por el que Sabrina decidió irse).
JukUik
@Nemocabezon Y no estoy justificando a Jonás, él, para mi, se equivoco en meter a Sabrina en todo ese lio que era solo de Mara y él. Si iba a tomar la decisión de acabar su relación y largarse de la reunión esa, debió irse con sus amigos, o directamente a recoger sus cosas de casa de Mara y largarse a la suya, no irse a donde Sabrina. Ese para mi es un error garrafal que no tiene justificación, pero podría llegar a entender que esa fue su unica ancla a tierra, para no desmoronarse y hundirse mas de lo que ya estaba. así lo veo yo.

Ahora dame tu 1 justificación que de verdad tenga peso, para que Mara hiciera lo que hizo en ese mes antes de la reunión, toda la preparación para Franco, convencer a Gabi para que no terminara a Brayan, cuadrar con Fernanda a espaldas de Jonás lo de los examenes de sangre (Porque ella estaba clara que Jonás nunca le iba a aceptar eso, entonces lo que hizo no sería lo mismo que cagarle la cara??), arriesgar su propia relación invitando a Sabrina para lograr convencera Jonás de ir a la juntada ya que Mara estaba mas que convencida que Sabrina estaba enamorada de Jonás y que por otro lado su relación con Jonás no estaba muy bien despues de la ultima juntada (que ella practicamente ignorara a Jonás por andar cogiendo con franco y chupandole la pija, y que quisiera armar show cuando caía encuenta que había ignorado a Jonas y cuando lo buscaba él estaba con Sabrina, por algo estuvo a punto de romper la regla de tomarle la leche a franco en esa mamada a escondidas en el baño y que de no ser porque Franco se puso de intenso con lo de verse por fuera de las jodas para romperle el orto Mara hubiese cruzado esa linea sin importarle un pito u relación y los sentimientos de Jonás, y todo solo por vengarse de Jonás, algo completamente sin sentido a mi entender!) y de que él le encontrara las fotos de Franco en el telefono de ella y por el comportamiento de ella durante ese mes.

Por estas cosas yo no puedo defender a Mara, así quiera en el fondo que la relación de estos 2 continue. Estoy claro que no fue la única que se equivocó, pero ella fue la que dejandose llevar por su "amiga" Fernanda cruzó por 3 kilometros los limites que ellos tenían le valió verga que se acabara la relación que tenía (de casi 2 años)
Por qué pensas que Mara convenció a Gabi para que no deje Brian?
JukUik
@hiphop911 Primero que nada disculpa que la respuesta sea tan larga pero es necesaria para que entiendas por qué tengo esa opinión.

Pues es una conclusión a la que llegué, puede que este super equivocado, solo tu sabrás si es correcta mi conclusión o no, pero, en algún momento antes de que Jonás consiguiera la carpeta con los examenes de sangre si mal no recuerdo, Gabi le comentó a Fernanda que ella desde antes de la juntada donde aún cogian con forros ya tenía planeado terminar con Brian, y que la unica que ya sabía era Mara, y despues conversando con Mara cambió de opinión y decidió esperar, lo cual no creo que haya sido por intereses de ella, ya que Franco no le prestaba atención a ella ni a Fer, Franco solo quería coger con Mara al igual que Mara con Franco (así lo vi yo).

Despues resultó que cuadraron toda esa juntada a los golpes, apuradas (Mara, Fernanda y Gabi). Y resulta que Mara y Fernanda complotaron lo de los examenes de sangre (Mara era la interesada ahí), entonces sumando 2+2, me cayó la idea de que Mara fue la que convenció a Gabi que se esperara ya que ella lo comentó con sus amigas que si eso era así esa sería "la ultima oportunidad para coger con Franco" (aunque yo pienso que si Jonás no hubiese estallado, Mara hubiese seguido viendo a Franco a espaldas de él, y muy probable eso sería impulsado por Fernanda que le hubiese estado dañando la mente para que siguiera cogiendo con Franco a espaldas del Jonny, o sea que le siguiera cagando la cara). Mara estuvo preparandose todo ese mes mientras complotaba con Fernanda y Gabi, ella muy claro lo dijo en la primera escena cuando sin haber pasado 10 minutos ya estaba cogiendo con franco sin forro, cuando Jonas la encontró con la cara contra la pared, ella le dijo a Franco que quería coger con él y solo él, todo el fin de semana.


Ella quería mandar al traste todos los limites que tenía con Jonas, quería tragar el semen de Franco, sentirlo en el útero (porque si no por qué tanto interes en garchar sin forros?), incluso (a mi entender) quería que franco le dejara sangrando el orto (el comentario ese de que quería que "le reventara el orto con esa batata" para mi no fue solo la calentura del momento) ella realmente quería que Franco le reventara el orto y lo más seguro es que fue Fernanda la que le estuvo dañando la mente una y otra vez en sus conversaciones, comentandole lo que ella sintió, y que a Mara le pudieran las ganas y la calentura.


Me he dado cuenta que vos no dejas esas converaciones entre las amigas por pura casualidad, esos comentarios que parecian irrelevantes cada vez que Franco le pedía el orto a Mara y ella ponía solo de excusa "a Jonás no le gustaría que entregue el orto". Pero ella nunca llegó a decir "no quiero" o "a mi no me gustaría", siempre ponía era a Jonás como excusa. Cada vez que Fernanda le decía que siguiera viendo a Franco, ella no lo negaba tajantemente, ponía excusas o cambiaba el tema, y Fernanda se daba cuenta de eso, por eso le insistía tanto. Como yo lo veo, tu fuiste dejando pequeñas pistas, comentarios que en el momento no significaban nada pero despues lo juntabas con otros sucesos que no tenían relación con esos comentarios y si estabas pendiente pum todo cuadraba
(EJEMPLO las insinuaciones de Fernanda con Mara con que se dejara hacer el orto, que se viera con Franco que siguiera cogiendo con él y con otros si se le antojaba, con la excusa que era solo sexo y que Jonás tenía que acostumbrarse así como Martin lo hizo, o que Jonás no tenía por qué enterarse, despues la insistencia de Franco en hacerle la cola y de verse por fuera de las jodas, luego resulta que Mara empieza a dilatarse la cola a niveles extremos, sin razón, cosa que desconcertó a Jonás y creo que hasta empezó a sospechar por donde venía la vuelta, al final con ese comentario de que le rompiera el orto con la batata...) no escribes cosas así por escribirlas, todo tiene un por qué. De hecho, en la mamada a escondidas en el baño, si Franco no se pone de intenso con lo de seguir congiendo a espaldas de Jonás y que le entregara el orto, hubiese roto mucho antes uno de los limites de Jonás y aún en contra de lo que pensaba Jonás ella se habría tragado la leche de Franco, sin importarle nada, ni su relación ni los sentimientos de Jonás, NADA, y nunca le dijo que no tajantemente a Franco, solo ponía de excusa a Jonás y prefirió dejarle el puesto.
JukUik
@hiphop911
Entonces por esas razones pienso que, si no fue Mara quien directamente convenció a Gabi para que no terminara con Brian y que Franco estuviera en la ultima juntada, por lo menos hablo con Gabi y algunos comentarios le hizo para que se aguantara, para así ella poder coger con Franco y mandar todo al carajo como lo hizo. Si uno se fija en las fecha de la supuestas conversaciones y las acciones de Mara tenemos que:
-Mara primero solo le chupaba la pija a Franco.
-Luego empezó que quería coger con Franco y pensamos que todo era la supuesta calentura por el tamaño de la pija (no sabiamos la situacion de Gabi con brian).
-Despues se da toda esa confabulación aspaldas de Jonás
-Lega el momento en que se Jonas escucha la conversación de Fer y Gabi, y yo sacando numeros y comparando +/- fechas, tenemos que el momento en que Mara se entero de lo de Gabi queriendo dejar a brian, da justamente en ese cambio de solo chupar a empezar a coger ocn Franco.
-Y despues están los comentarios de Mara a Franco mientras cogían recien llegar a lo de Fer y luego los del baño y que hiciera todo lo que hizo a espaldas de Jonas.

Son muchos pequeños detalles que me dan a entender que Mara era la única interesada, la única en quien Franco estaba intereado, Mara nunca dijo de querer coger con los demás sin forros, solo Franco. Fue la primera en enterarse lo de Gabi, y presentó ese cambio de actitud que, si no juntas los puntos, pasa inadvertido y terminas pensando que fue culpa de que Jonás la incentivara a que se liberara, cuando ella estaba jugando su papel de "Santita" porque tenía sus propios motivos ocultos, es más, Fernanda nisiquiera estaba enterada de que Gabi quería dejar a Brian, ella también se sorprendio cuando esta se lo dijo. Entonces por una cuestión de descarte y de sumar 2+2 lo vuelvo a decir, todo me señala a Mara.


No digo que yo tengo razón con estas suposiciones, precisamente, son suposiciones mias, no hay nada confirmado, pero tengo esa idea clavada en mi mente, así como cuando los papás de uno intuyen algo que nos pasa, así nosotros no digamos nada ni le comentemos el problema especifico que tengamos o la situacion en la que estamos, y ellos llegan y hacen un comentario y justamente todo resulta siendo o resultando como ellos lo djeron sin haber estado enterados de todo lo que sucedia, es como una corazonada. que repito, puede que esté equivocadisimo pero por ahora es a la conclusion a la que llegué con los pocos datos que has dado.


Por algo tu no mostraste mas la conversación entre Mara y Fernanda, la que leyó Jonás en el Facebook de Mara, ahí debe haber mucha mas información, que tu a posta para no spoilear futuros capítulos no revelaste. Que tanto hablaron ellas 2 en esa salida según a buscar el celular de Fer o algo asi? Cual fue el detonante para que Mara por fin tomara la decisión de ir al psicologo? ¿Se habrá mandado una gorda, influenciada por Fer? (Lo unico que se con seguridad es que no fue un consejo de Fer) Pienso que algo, algo que vas a revelar luego, tuvo que haber pasado con Mara para que ella pensara "Jonas tenía razón, no tengo excusas, que hice, necesito hablar con alguien sobre lo que estoy haciendo".
JukUik +1
@hiphop911
Leyendo nuevamente algunos capítulos, intentando refrescar mis ideas despues de darte esa respuesta larga, encontré 2 tramos de conversaciones de Jonas, una con gabi y otra con Mara en las páginas 555 y 561 del libro respectivamente, que le dan aún mas valor a mi teoria de que Mara convenció a Gabi de que no terminara con Brian, y así poder cogerse a Franco, y luego poder cogerselo sin forro. Estas conversaciones confirman que Mara sabía desde antes de empezar a coger con Franco que Gabi quería terminar con Brian, y que a partir de una conversación entre ellas 2, Gabi decidió no terminar con su novio antes de la juntada donde aún cogian con forros.

Acá vuelvo a repetir, tu dejás ese información en medio de conversaciones donde creemos que no tiene importancia, y casi 100 paginas después resulta que es una información muy importante, por minima que sea, ya que termina complementando otras conversaciones donde se revelan detalles pero no en su totalidad (ejemplo, la conversacion de Gabi y Fernanda la cual escuchó Jonás), y esos pequeños trozos de información de casi 100 páginas atras son vitales...

Y saliendome del tema de la respuesta, esas pequeñas cosas son por las cuales yo pienso que Mara no tiene justificación alguna. Mara durante toda la juntada que cogieron con forros, se la pasó manipulando a Jonás diciendole que hiciera cosas para ella poder desatarse y que Jonás en su calentura y excitación no le pudiera no le quisiera decir nada, o que el se desfasara e hiciera locuras y ella despues poder tener que sacarle en cara en caso de que Jonás se molestara o se echara para atras, como justamente sucedió en el capítulo 38.

Mara, Fer y Gabi compartian información entre ellas para manipular a Jonás, se pusieron de acuerdo en un montón de cosas, sin que Jonás ni siquiera se enterara, Mara en un montón de ocasiones insinuó que quería y que estuvo a punto de coger con Franco sin condón, que no lo hacía porque se iba a sentir muy puta, nisiquiera, por respeto hacia Jonás, o por los limites que se había trazado, Mara le aceptó a Gabi y a Fernanda que sí tenía ganas de que Franco le reventara el orto (no lo dijo directamente, pero cuando las amigas le preguntaban, se quedaba callada o cambiaba el tema, y el que calla, otorga).

En la página 582, Jonás le pregunta a Mara cuando la consiguió con el plug anal, que llevaba todo el día dilatandose el orto, que si lo que quería era que otro se lo reventara (no hay que ser Einstein para darse cuenta que Jonás se refería a Franco, así no lo haya nombrado) y Mara solo con esa pregunta tuvo un orgasmo anal.

Entonces todos estos pequeños detalles, de los cuales hay muchisimos mas, que parecen sin importancia pero si la tienen, me dan la razón o por lo menos opino que me acercan un paso mas a estar en lo correcto en muchos comentarios que he hecho y que los otros usuarios me matán (sobre todo cuando digo que Mara estuvo a punto de quedar con el orto sangrando, y que no ser por Fernanda, Jonás cuando fue en la madrugada a buscar las llaves de la casa de la mama, la consigue a Mara en la cama con el orto chorreando sangre, o cuando digo que pienso que la relación de ello 2 murió, por más que se sigan queriendo/amando) y me dicen "fan de Jonás" o que "odio a Mara" ( @Nemocabezon ), cuando simplemente doy opiniones pero con bases, no solo por darlas.
JukUik
"En la página 582, Jonás le pregunta a Mara cuando la consiguió con el plug anal, que llevaba todo el día dilatandose el orto, que si lo que quería era que otro se lo **reventaran** (me comí la n en esa parte"
a la mierrr, le tenes bien estudiado toda la historia...
JukUik
@garcheskikpo Fueron cosas que en su momento me chocaron un monton y me hicieron pensar mal de Mara y que despues, con mas info que fue revelando hiphop solo me confirmaban mis sospechas. Cuando comento algo es porque hiphop dejó la info ahí entre lineas, que pueda que esté equivocado, sí, pero coño todo me señala en esa dirección.
Fuaaaaa infumable ... Los pibes estos opinando ... Otra vez lo mismo cada capítulo ... El pibe este repite lo mismo ... Che JukUik , copa y leee y dissssfruta de lo que otro escribe... Y deja de cuestionar al autor... Loco disfrutaaaaa... Cortarla ...
@hiphop911 .... Ahhh bien ... Pero es infumable este Flaco ...
@criselkpo yo adoro a ese tipo @JukUik
Hace que yo no tenga que comentar los relatos ya que el escribe todo lo que yo quisiera comentar
Y mejor de lo que yo lo haria
Sigo esta historia desde el dia busque relatos de primas en 2019 me alegra ver mas Fans
@criselkpo es verdad jaja, tipo ese meme que dice "ya párale wey" 😜🤣🤣
Soy yo, o esta parte deberia haberse llamado Repercusiones en lugar de la anterior ?
Aca queda mejor
fuaa, no hay lucho por decir despues de todos los comentarios.

lo único el caso este de Lorena es como cuando aparecen esas notas random en las paginas web o portales de "tener sexo con una amiga refuerza la amistad" y wara wara....

por supuesto que van puntos y a la espera de un nuevo libro de este multiverso