Capítulo especial Mi, prima Mara 2 - Extra

Remember that all the material is uploaded to https://hiphop911.webnode.com/ and to Instagram hiphop911ok. Follow them. It's important! Greetings and thanks.ONLY ON MY SITE: Special Chapter: Mara Seduces MartinIt's an excerpt from what that last weekend would have been like at Fernanda's house if it had been longer and hadn't cut off too soon. This is a deleted scene, but deleted. It shouldn't be taken as possible, since several events surrounding it aren't part of the final story either. It's only for the purpose of demonstrating (a possible) sequence, had that final gathering lasted longer. I hope you enjoy it, I gave it a final touch so it would be hot and in line with the story of that second part. Beyond being not part of the canon, the elements it contains continue the thread.To get it, go to my siteI remember that part 3 of My cousin, Mara, is still in the writing process, but if I can advance something more, I will. ----- EXTRA ----- ASIMISMO, I leave you an extra of sketches of some incomplete ideas that could have been, but were not part of it. SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER If you haven't read My cousin, Mara: The path of temptation don't follow.Extreme and dangerous gamesAs the days went by, the challenges became more and more perverse and dangerous. It was an idea I ended up discarding as unnecessary. There was no need to go that far, when with much less you could show off the worst side of everyone. For illustrative purposes, there was a moment when Fernanda lost a bet and had to assume the consequences, so she had to upload a photo to Instagram, wearing lingerie and sitting on Brian's lap. Although she was the most daring in that aspect, it made her nervous like never before. As if for the first time she doubted the limit we had reached. It wasn't just a photo. She was half-naked on another man's body who wasn't her boyfriend and showed his torso and who knows what else uncovered. Of course, she had a best friends section and had to do it temporarily, but the time it stayed online was enough for someone to ask her what's up with that photo. And of course, not everyone sleeps early. Would you be able to do something like this? Have you ever done it? Would you allow your boyfriend/girlfriend, husband/wife to play games like these? Comment what you think about it... Left out important material in the second part. It didn't feel good, literally speaking, all ideas mixed up. It was too much... But well, sharing them and seeing what else could happen is hot... The third part got delayed a bit, I just wrote half of it. And many things wouldn't make sense if I had left that material deleted from the story... In short, this idea showed that they were involved in a situation that had been out of their control for a long time. Everything was extreme, careless... I also considered other ideas like heavy bets that implied any kind of thing you had to do or do without the possibility of regretting it. Of course, I didn't explore all of this too much. They were just notes... Also, there would be a moment where Jonás would found completely lost and out of it, prior to what would be his 'great explosion'. I was going to agree with everything that happened until that moment. Of course, with doubts, but leaving everything happen and even making my own way. It was a state of total disconnection, as if I were under the influence or control of an external entity. Even to the point of consenting to Fernanda's proposal that Mara should not leave Franco for the whole day, in a kind of his girlfriend and all that it entailed. He did the same with Sabrina, of course. But the situation was getting totally out of hand. I didn't want to fill Mara and Franco's scenes with exhaustion. Yes, I wanted them to take it as the worst thing that could happen to Jonas, scenes with him, but so many were unnecessary. At a moment in the night, after Jonás had finished exhausted from catching his special redhead, he got up to get some water. The music was still playing while all the party participants slept to recover their strength. Not everyone was sleeping. I could feel a strange noise at a distance that the music wasn't letting me recognize well. When I left the kitchen and wandered around, I saw all the members scattered around the house, sleeping. Everyone except Mara and Franco. They were nowhere to be found. Yet, I felt like some voices coming from somewhere. Walking intrigued and in my underwear through the place, I started to hear them louder when I approached the garage area. When I opened the door slightly, those sounds manifested as what they really were, moans. There they were again, Mara and Franco. Having sex. But the perversity of the situation was that they were having sex on Martin's car cap and hard... Mara had her legs open, naked, with the thong hanging only from one of them. It was crude the degree of disgustingness in which Jonas found himself immersed. His heart was beating very strongly at Watching the violence with which Mara was being penetrated, receiving a rough treatment that wasn't his. The way she enjoyed it, completely lost. She shook all over, just like her boobs in each push from Franco. The infamy of the situation was that he didn't seem to be using a condom. Or again without a rubber? Didn't he have enough already like that? Lucky I won't make him do it... How long would I put up with all this wear and tear for so much sex? Just thinking about the consequences in her vagina from screwing nonstop made me nauseous... The face... It was strange. Like something wasn't letting her stop. Because she looked tired but still continued. Franco gathered her boobs and sucked them strongly. And so several others... I think the final product was what I could give best, but that doesn't mean some other element might take it for part three... Or has taken it... Jeje... They'll have to wait, meanwhile, fire away with your comments. I read all of them... Regards

11 comentários - Capítulo especial Mi, prima Mara 2 - Extra

Como se hace esperar esto amigo!!!🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️ mara esta loca por franco. Y va camino a terminar preñada
esa juntada era la última para sacarse las ganas de una buena japi, asi que fue a todo o nada
una humilde opinión, con todo respeto: si bien siguen siendo relatos calientes, me parece que estad dando muchas vueltas sobre algo que ya habías cerrado. Esta bueno que venga una 3ra parte pero lo anterior deberías dejarlo.
Por otro lado me quedé con ganas de la Gabi de la 1er parte. De las escenas en la playa! venía todo muy caliente y después casi que lo dejaste de lado.
Nada... solo es una opinión. Me gustan tus relatos. saludos
Igual, imagino que, si en vez de ser el auto de Martín, ella o hubiese hecho en el auto de Jonás, seria una locura, porque ahi le sumariamos algo mas, como una humillación mas directa.
Espero la 3er parte, que seguro va a ser tan buena como las 2 anteriores.
Abrazo
Igual, imagino que, si en vez de ser el auto de Martín, ella o hubiese hecho en el auto de Jonás, seria una locura, porque ahi le sumariamos algo mas, como una humillación mas directa.
Espero la 3er parte, que seguro va a ser tan buena como las 2 anteriores.
Abrazo
Igual, imagino que, si en vez de ser el auto de Martín, ella o hubiese hecho en el auto de Jonás, seria una locura, porque ahi le sumariamos algo mas, como una humillación mas directa.
Espero la 3er parte, que seguro va a ser tan buena como las 2 anteriores.
Abrazo
Mmm no entendi nada si lo borraste o es un borrador . No se entiende si va seguir esto en la tercera parte ... Tanto franco y mara aburre un toque .. Y Gaby, Sabri, Fer.. Eso era lo mas caliente .Todos juntos .. Jona termian un cornudo sumiso , malisimo
Jajaja
es como el caso del agua que parece de jamaica, sabe a limón pero es de tamarindo 😂😂
JukUik
Creía que era yo era el unico que pensaba eso... No entendí en que punto de la historia Jonas terminó siendo un SUMISO, CORNUDO y podría decir que llegó al punto de ser tremendo IDIOTA siendo manipulado por todas las amigas de Mara y por la propia Mara. Lo unico que faltó fué que Franco también se lo terminara cogiendo a él!!! Quisiera ver como continúa la historia solo para saber si es suficientemente hombre y toma la decisión de terminar con Mara... La verdad a pesar de todo el el s
Yo solo espero que subas relatos seguidos como lo hacías de un inicio jaja, siempre sorprendiendo, esperemos que la 3 parte no tarde, gracias capo
RRRFTR
Cuanto tardarás en subir la tercera parte?
Dame una fecha aprox, pq ya no aguanto la espera!!!
La verdad no entiendo nada,si están o no están, pero me gustaría que tuvieran un giro los protagonistas,es verdad lo de mara y franco cansa y Jonas no puede ser tan pelotudo, tiene que haber limites
Tené en cuenta que esa segunda parte se trata de eso!! Jaja
@hiphop911 esperemos,aún tengo esperanzas en esta historia
emmaq
Siendo honesto no me gusto el q pego la historia. De ser un comun acuerdo de joda loca paso a parecer q Mara tiene una relacion con franco y Jonas es un cornudo sumiso. Estaria bueno ver las consecuencias de la joda y no q de una a la otra.
emmaq +5
Esto lo digo porque lo de mara con franco no parece sexo y nada mas. Si es por jonas se garcha a todas q es la idea de la joda pero mara solo esta noviando con franco
llegue pensando encontrar algo de Jonás "the killer" "the best" pero no, el único "the best" es Franco que sigue rellenando a Mara por todos lados.

largate alguno de la mejor amiga che, quiero saber si apresaron al sátiro de la piedra.
leido, lindo, esencia fiel... pero como lei por ahi, largue nomas maestro que la mesa esta servida y los muchachos tienen hambre!!!
A mí me encanta como franco se culea a Mara, conozco muchas parejas así y está súper bien relatado todo.... Ojalá y ella siga así!!!!! Sacando la súper puta que hay dentro de ella, y que el la siga apoyando a Mara, haciendo la suya también claro.
emmaq
Pero en la fiesta hasta ahora franco y mara siempre usaron forro. Porque dice otra vez sin forro?