The train

This was three weeks ago, it was a weekday, to be exact it was a Tuesday, I was going to work on the train, very quiet listening to music, when at one of the stops a woman around 58 years old got on, she was very beautiful, with a lovely body, long legs, and very nice breasts. I'm not someone who likes to look at women in the street since I have a partner, but this really beautiful woman captivated me, her skin was white, and her eyes were green like emeralds. She was wearing a long dress with many flowers, half-transparent, with a beautiful neckline that I imagined my friend would fit between her breasts. After a few stops the train started to empty out and she chose the seat in front of mine so she could see me and those lovely legs, if she noticed I was looking at them, she would cross them slowly so I could enjoy them. With a wink and her tongue on her lips, she turned them back and opened them up for me to see what wasn't underneath that lovely dress. My friend Bonner couldn't move and wanted to get to the empty seat, but she noticed the situation and came over to my seat. Without words, she gave me a paper with her number written on it and said I'm a woman without underwear.......

3 comentários - The train

Arrancaste bien, pero no entiendo ni jamás entenderé por qué taaaaannnnn cortó el relato man, escribí todo, entiendo que quieren ganar seguidores o que sigan el cuento, pero por qué así tan corto, una opinión mía ehh.....empezaste bien igual
La verdad soy nuevo escribiendo, y me pareció que estaba bueno, no se sino sería tal vez muy largo y nadie lo Lee
Fíjate el segundo osea la continuación es las mas larga
@Polo31002 para nada, fíjate que hay varios usuarios que ponen ejemplo encuentro con mí tía cap. 300 y los leemos jajajja tranqui que hay mucho más largos, la idea es buena van puntos