The Stand-in Boyfriend - Final

Those months of Erasmus in Strasbourg were getting very long for me. The photos that my dear Lydia sent me by email didn't help to calm my anxieties. The egg pain was becoming unbearable, and I knew from experience how hard it was to find a place and a quiet moment to masturbate in that small apartment.
Whoever thought of removing the doors in a student flat? Even in the bathroom, they had put one of those ridiculous curtains instead! If only my flatmates hadn't been so attractive, I might have found a way not to be hot all day, but those kids were something out of the ordinary.
Finally the hour arrived. Lidia was going to call me at any moment, so I stretched out on my bed but made sure to leave a note hanging outside that read, in French, 'Do not disturb please'.
I waited for the phone to ring. And it didn't disappoint. The whole nightstand vibrated, making my heart take a turn.
Hello sweetie, I've missed you —I heard her sweet voice through that old bakelite telephone.
It was a balm for my ears. How I loved that little girl!
Hello my girl, I've missed you so much too. You don't know how much I wish I could be there with you —I said.
Mmm... if you were here with me you know very well what we would be doing right now - said Lydia with a very sensual voice - I'm ready for you my love, I wish you could see me. I'm naked, darling.
Fucked Erasmus, who used to tell me to be so good at my studies and decide to have an experience abroad.
Sweetheart, I have to tell you something. I hope you won't get angry —my precious girlfriend continued—. You know how much I love you, you're the love of my life. But... a good cock is missing in my pussy; it's constantly itching, asking for meat, and it has to be soon. That's why... I thought you'd understand better than anyone else; I need a substitute boyfriend.


END.

8 comentários - The Stand-in Boyfriend - Final

Con todo Respeto, te cagaste en el final, no es que sea malo, por el contrario es genial muy bien pensado y un giro completamente inesperado, como lo dije te cagaste en el final pero a la vez es un final genial, no quiero decir que sea malo, es perfecto, pero es crear un ciclo sin fin....... al menos yo asi lo veo y asi me gusto, es solo que las historias que el principio se vuelve un final me dejan con ganas de mas, no es como las historia donde el fin, fin ahi murio todo se resuelve todo, pero vuelvo a repetir, FUE GENIAL, tanto el relato como el final aunque merece continuacion, o un spin off, que paso con maria, el tiempo del relato nueve a este seria bueno saberlo, repito es solo mi opinion
Es como que lo cerraste muy asi nomas. Que paso del 9 a este. Creo q cereaba mejor el 9 con la llegada de lydia y el resto uno se lo imaginaba. Sino concuerdo de q debería seguir un spin off
Exacto coincido con los demás comentarios, fue un cierre muy forzado, en el cual dejaste cosas al aire. Saludos.
El relato es de una pagina de relatos y este no es el final. Evidentemente copio y pego cualquier cosa busquen en la deep web y veran
No suelo comentar, pero aqui va.
Que mal final, parece post de un menor de edad que copia en los examenes.
Pesimo... todo iba perfecto hasta el 9, yo hubiera echo que se follara a Tania y a Lidia, y que Maria por celo hubiera cambiado y aceptado el amor (y las buenas folladas que el protagonista le podia dar) pero bueno cada quien escribe como quiere... o puede u.u
Natalia gracias por el tiempo dedicado a esto. Pero no falta un episodio entre la llegada de lidia y Estrasburgo?